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“I’ve been accepted to Harvard [Business School], Stanford [GSB], Wharton (with scholarship) and Chicago Booth (with scholarship too)! Thank you for all your help — especially all the time and effort you took to go through my life and find the right stories to tell that set my application apart from all others. Your experience, editing skills and knowledge of the process are top-notch and I am sure your help was instrumental in me getting offers at all these schools!”

“Got into Stanford!!! And Kellogg1 YR. Thanks so much for your help – let me know if you need me to write a positive review, I’d be more than happy to! …You have a fantastic editing/working style and I’d recommend you to anyone!”

“I received more good news this week. I was accepted at Stanford. Its gonna be a tough choice between [Stanford] GSB and HBS [Harvard Business School]! I’m excited to make the decision after ASWs. Thanks again for all of your help, I couldn’t have done it without you. I will definitely refer others, and probably need your help again in the near future.”

“I want to share with you the great news that I got accepted into Harvard Business School andWharton with a $30,000 Fellowship!!! I appreciate your guidance and insight in helping me step back and think about my general pitch and developing specific examples to complement my story line. Your services were key to my acceptances and I will strongly recommend my friends applying to business school to work with you.”

“Accepted at wharton, harvard [Business School] , stanford and mit [Sloan]. going to harvard.”

“I wanted to share some good news : I got accepted at Stanford GSB and Kellogg as well and withdrew my applications from other schools. I would be attending Stanford this fall. Thanks for the help.”

“FYI – My Harvard [Business School] interview went well and I received an acceptance call last Friday! Thanks for your help.”

“I obtained admission to Stanford [GSB] and Wharton and was WLd at Kellogg. As you know, Stanford is my dream school and that’s where I’ll be headed. I wanted to say a big thank you for all of your help during the process. Many of the insights I received from you manifested throughout my application, and you certainly deserve credit for my success. It was a pleasure working with you and I wish you all the best.”

“I just wanted to let you know that I was just accepted to HBS [Harvard Business School]. I am very excited, and am pretty sure I will be headed there this fall. Thanks again for all your help.”

“Hi, Your services have been great and I look forward to working together more. You are in the business of helping dreams come true : ) Thanks for everything so far. [Admitted at Stanford GSB, HarvardBusiness School, Wharton, [Dartmouth] Tuck, NYU Stern]”

“WE DID IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHARTON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you so much. I 100% believe that I could never have done this without you. From the bottom of my heart – thank you.”

“I GOT IN!!! Hi! I just got the call from Derrick Bolton that I was accepted [at Stanford GSB]!! I’m SO unbelievably exciting and can’t thank you enough for all of your help and guidance throughout the process….Thank you!!!!! I can’t even believe it’s real. I was so shocked on the phone and SO relieved! By the way- is there a good mailing address for you so I can send a thank you?? Thank youuuuu!!! Have a great afternoon :)”

“I was successful at Stanford [GSB] as well. I am going to Stanford. . . .Anyway, thank you very much again. 100% approval for the applications we worked together on.”

“[Admitify Consultant] was a great help throughout my MBA application. He helped me pull apart my experience to show to business schools the skills that I developed throughout my professional career. He asked me key questions that made me reflect upon my experiences in a deeper way. And hence, the essays I wrote truly exposed my values, my skills and my goals. I am currently a first year at HBS [Harvard Business School].”

“Hi! I got into Wharton with a $50 K scholarship. Thank you soooo much, couldn’t have done it without your help ! … Thank you again !!! Regards”

“This is the follow-up of my application process. I have also been admitted for Harvard Business School which I really could not believe. Well as I said in my last e-mail: in the end everything just worked out perfect. I am very happy and I will go to HBS most probably. Thanks again,”

“In at [Dartmouth] Tuck!!!!!! Subject says it all. I’m in!!! Thanks for all your help. … … Tuck is my dream school… Yessss!! …. Had a lot going against me (below school average GMAT, older applicant) but we got it done.”

“Hello: Great news: i am admitted to Stanford GSB. Thanks a lot for your help and support.”

“I wanted to thank you and share some great news with you. I was accepted into all my schools,Kellogg, Booth and Wharton. Wharton is my #1 choice. I owe a lot of it to you so thank you for all your help- truly appreciate it. THANK YOU!!”

“Actually, I got in at all 6 that I applied to! [Harvard Business School, Wharton, Kellogg, Michigan, Chicago, UCLA Anderson]. But my decision is pretty easy, and it is obviously Harvard. I fell in love after spending two days there, and out of all the schools, it is the only one that I see myself ever possibly regretting not going to. Thank you for all of your help, if you ever need a testimonial, look no further!

“I GOT IN [to Stanford GSB]!!!!!!!!!! I GOT THE CALL!!!!!!!!!!… Thank you again very much for your support. Thank you!”

“Hi, Yes, thankfully I was accepted in December during first round admissions and will pursue the dual degree program [Harvard MD-MBA]! Best,”

“I`m sure I wouldn`t have been accepted to HBS [Harvard] and to [Dartmouth] Tuck without [your] help, advice, and perspective. It`s one thing to have had worthwhile experiences and some accomplishments, but without the right marketing, I don`t think you can really “sell yourself” to the admissions committees. You had that insight and were obviously very keyed into what interests different schools.”

“I have officially been ACCEPTED to HBS [Harvard Business School]! I seriously didn’t even think there was a chance I would get in before I applied and especially after my interview! I am still in serious denial (so I’ve also included the official letter below as evidence). I could not have done it without ALL of your help. I don’t think it will be possible for me to consider NOT going to HBS, so I am going to be very relaxed as the other 3 decisions roll in! Cheers, [Later] In at [Chicago] Booth with a $50K scholarship :-)… [Later] I’m in at Wharton! I never dreamed that I would be choosing between HBS and Wharton! Feeling very fortunate this holiday season. Thanks again for all of your help throughput the process, I certainly never would have been able to get 4 applications in round one without your help. I will definitely recommend you to the [company] crew applying next year. Have a great holiday and I will keep you posted on my final decision! Though I don’t know that I can turn down HBS.”

“Paaauuuuuuuull!!!!!! I just got in [to Harvard Business School]!!! I can’t even type right now, I’m so happy! Thank you SO much for EVERYTHING! From your overall guidance to your specific advice on essays, and calming me down throughout the process you were the best! I really couldn’t have done it without your help. Please feel free to use me as a reference and I’ll be happy to share about my great experience with you! I will take a few days off to celebrate and then will be back in touch for Stanford. Best, … [LinkedIn testimonial:] [Admitify consultant] is very easy to communicate with and extremely helpful in his advice. He is also wonderful working with tight deadlines. It was a pleasure interacting with him!”

“I just got a call from Derrick Bolton! I got into Stanford!!!!!! Thank you sooooo much for all your guidance, support, help, mentoring, and putting up with my application nerves. You went above and beyond. I am so unbelievably happy and truly truly truly appreciate all you have done. Whatever happens, I’m so happy and am thrilled at this incredible opportunity…. Overall in at GSB, waitlist at HBS. Incredible result. Thank you so much Paul for everything. Best, [Later] I’m in [off Wait Kist atHBS/Harvard]! Have till Monday to decide. Wow what a ride Paul. I cannot believe you helped me get into the two most selective business school programs in the world. I am so grateful. I have till Monday to decide. I think I’m still going for Stanford but I will definitely let you know. I can still vividly recall our conversation when I called you for the first time and said I wanted to apply. Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!! ”

“Thanks again for all your help! Because of the great essays I was offered interviews by all schools I applied for Wharton, Kellogg [Northwestern], Stanford, and HBS [Harvard Business School]. After interviewing I was offered admissions to Kellogg (my number one choice) and HBS.”

“I got accepted into both Wharton and Kellogg [Northwestern]. I decided to go to Wharton. I would like to thank you for your help in guiding me through this essay writing process. It really helped me look at and present myself from all new angles.”

“Hi, I got into the [Stanford] GSB!!!! I got a call from the admissions office, and they told me that I’ll get an official email tomorrow. Thanks for all your help!!!”

“Hi: Not sure if you remember me, but you helped me with my essays when I applied to HBS [Harvard Business School] in the first round…. Well, I was accepted (without an interview!)… Thanks.”

“Hi, THanks. Not sure if u know but [client name] has been accepted at Stanford [GSB]! Hope all is well.”

“Hi: Not sure if you remember me, but you helped me with my essays when I applied to HBS [Harvard Business School] in the first round…. Well, I was accepted (without an interview!)… Thanks.”

MIT [Sloan] is a go!!! Thank you so much for your help Paul. Honestly, could not have done it without you! …. I am leaning more towards MIT (~85%); however, I did get an offer from Chicago [Booth] last week. Thanks again. Honestly, you were tremendously helpful from beginning to end. I can’t tell you how appreciative I was. I was serious about the recommendation part; so just let me know.”

“I GOT INTO WHARTON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THEY CALLED ME AT 1:45PM EST (someone named [name])!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you SO SO SO SO much for your help!! … Thanks again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! [later] Wharton also offered me a $15k/year fellowship! Thanks again for all of your help with this process! You definitely steered me in the right direction with my essays! Your advice is of infinite value!”

“Hi, Thanks. I got accepted to Wharton and HBS [Harvard Business School], so exciting. Thanks for all your help!!!”

“Hello I wanted to let you know I was just admitted [to Stanford GSB]! I’m glad we worked together on my essays. Have a nice day,”

“I am IN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! [at Wharton] I am so happy I am laughing and crying at the same time like a crazy person!!!”

“Hi, I was accepted [at Harvard Business School]! I am very excited and relieved. Thank you for all of your help and advice. It made a big difference! Best regards,”

“Omg !!! I just got accepted to kellogg !!! Thanks you soooooo much Paul .i know for a fact that this would not have been possible without you !!!i am trembling as I am typing this ….. How did this happen !!!!!! … Thank you so much for believing in me and helping me all along . I don’t know how to thank you enough . My essays got me in more than anything I am sure ! … Never in my wildest of dreams would I have thought that I would make it into one of the M-7….. if it wasnt for your encouragement and guidance all along…. Have a wonderful day ahead ! Regards, [name] a Very Happy customer :)) … [Later:] Wait,Duke [Fuqua] wants me too !!!! this is happiness of epic proportions ! We did it!”

“Hi, Thanks so much for reaching out! I heard back from both [Harvard Business School (HBS) &Stanford GSB] today and received acceptances to each school. Thank you for all of your help! … Thank you so much! I am not sure yet but am leaning towards Stanford. Thank you again for your help, and I will keep you posted! Best,”

“Hi, … I want to thank you again for your help with the application essays. I got into Wharton and MIT [Sloan], and have decided to go to Wharton in August! Best regards”

“Hey, Good news: Accepted to both Wharton and Kellogg. Wharton has offered a 40,000 USD scholarship spread over 2 years. Thanks a lot for your help – a longer, more grateful mail later!!”

“Hi! I got into Stanford [GSB] but not HBS. Thanks!! Best, [Joint Degree MBA/MPP student at Stanford GSB & Harvard Kennedy School]”

“Hi, … Both Columbia and MIT accepted me, but the latter was the better program for me. I greatly appreciate your guidance and help throughout this process and look forward to staying in touch!”

“I wanted to let you know how grateful I am for your help in putting my essays together. I … was accepted by Harvard, Wharton and UCLA [Anderson] … You were fantastic–thanks again for your help and responsiveness!!!! … My investment was worth it!”

Wharton – yes!!!!!!!!!! Paul, thank you so much for your help!!!!!!!!! I couldn’t have done it without you, that is simply a fact!!!!”

“Dear [Admitify consultant], I was accepted to Harvard [Business School], I’m very happy and I still can’t believe it! Thank you so much for all your help through the application, I couldn’t have made it without you. Thank you for your involvement, for challenging me and pushing my thinking and for all the prompt replies even in weekends. Your help turned my application from a rough set of ideas into a diamond! Thank you,” [Later] Hi Paul, Yes, both me and [name] got an offer from Wharton, we are very happy! Thank you so much,”

“Hi, it was funny when I looked through my email this morning: as always I had a lot of junk mail from people with all these creative names, somehow your name sounded so familiar and even without opening the email I thought to myself ‘wasn’t this someone who helped me with the essays’. It is great to hear from you…. Please let me know when the book [Great Applications for Business School] is finished and goes into the bookstores. I will want to buy one.” [Admitted to Harvard Business School]”

“Hi, Just wanted to let you know that I got into Wharton and accepted the offer. I also received a Columbia interview invitation but turned it down since I already decided on Wharton. Thank you so much for all your help! I really really appreciate it! I will highly recommend your partnership to my friends also. Anyway just wanted to let you know. Hope all is well!!!!!!”

“ Hi Paul, Heard back today from HBS [Harvard Business School] and got an interview!!! Thank you thank you!!!! [Later] I got in [to HBS]!!!! ”

“Dear [Admitify consultant], I’m very happy to tell you that I got admitted [to Columbia Business School]! It has been such a pleasure working with you! Thank you for all your guidance through this process, I’ve learned so much with your help! I especially appreciate how professionally you’ve handled my requests and how quickly you reply my emails (even on weekends)! I knew that I was in good hands the second I started working with you! You have answered all my questions with such details! You have also gone out of your ways to help me in every possible way! For instance, when I got the interview request and only had 3 days to prepare for it, you moved one of your appointments to accommodate my schedule, really really appreciate it!
I cannot say enough about how wonderful it has been working with you! Thank you soooooo much! … Regards,”

“ Admitted to Wharton! I really hope Harvard says yes … [Later] Admitted to HBS [Harvard]! We made it!”

“Hi You emailed at just the right time – I just found out yesterday that I had made it into LBS [London Business School]. I’ve been offered a place on the MBA starting Aug 20XX. Thanks very much for all your help. I would be happy to provide feedback on your site…. Let me know how I can do this Cheers”

“Wanted to let you know that I was just accepted to Wharton today! I’m so psyched, as Wharton is my #1 choice – thanks for all of your help!”

“hi, i heard from harvard [Business School] today and wanted to share with you the good news. everything is fine. thanks for your great help!”

“Dear [Admitify consultant]: It has been several months now since we worked together on my MBA essays. I want you to know that I was accepted by Wharton, University of Chicago [Booth] and am still waiting for Columbia and Berkeley. … So it looks like that I am Philadelphia bound. Thanks so much!!!”

“Hi, I got into Columbia [Business School]!! I’m so excited. Thank you so much for your help throughout the process. You’ve been very patient and thoughtful. I’m looking forward to this weekend’s CBS student meet up! Thank you so much,”

“Hi, Was gonna let you know tmr alone with the results from the other two. But anyways, I got the phone call [from Wharton] and got in! … [Later:] Hi Paul! Great news – I got into HBS [Harvard Business School]! … we still got 3 for 3! HBS, Wharton, CBS [Columbia Business School]. Thanks once again for your tremendous help. My application would not have been so strong without your brilliant guidance and professional support. I still remember the first time we talked, and at that time I did not believe I had a shot at these schools with a low undergrad GPA. You made all of this possible! I would definitely be referring you to all my friends and colleagues who will apply to the future….I am very excited! Let’s please keep in touch,… I have to say I couldn’t have done it, or at least the qualities definitely wouldn’t have been this high, without your help. I am very impressed by your professionalism, work quality and consistency… I want to say that I am lucky to have picked up your book and hired your services…. Best regards,”

“I just got an offer from Kellogg. So I’m happy. Thanks for your all your help so far. :)”

“Dear [Admitify consultant], I received the much awaited good news from INSEAD this morning. Yup, I’ve been admitted to INSEAD!! I’ll be starting in the Singapore campus on 7th Jan. It’s yet to sink in… seems like a dream! A BIG thank you for your invaluable support, guidance and patience during the long drawn out admissions process!! I couldn’t have done it without your help!”

“In [Chicago]Booth!!! Just got the call. Can’t wait to share with you. Very happy especially after US NEWS ranked it second, tie with Stanford. Very excited and grateful. Thank you!”

“Hey, So, after being admitted to [Dartmouth] Tuck and [UCLA] Anderson …, I have decided to accept at Anderson (curve ball, I know). After attending admit weekends, I have realized that Anderson offers the most opportunities to achieve my career aspirations in entertainment. Plus, it was the perfect fit for me. I just wanted to thank you for all of your help and am letting you know that I am sending several candidates your way…. Thanks Paul, this drama major with a mediocre GPA could never have been accepted to top tier schools without your help!”

“I’ve been accepted to HBS. Thank you for all of your help these past six months, it’s great to finally exhale and feel the realness of this whole MBA application adventure.I could barely read the details of the admit letter, I was a little too excited. But tonight after work I’ll settle down and start to get excited about the possibility of going to HBS…:) [Later] I did receive admission to [Carnegie Mellon] Tepper this week and was awarded a pretty healthy fellowship. I loved everything about Tepper, from its curriculum to its community, but Boston was always my goal, and I couldn’t possibly pass up the opportunity to join HBS’s class of 2018. I doubt I need to justify that to you or anyone else any further! Thanks again for your guidance this fall, it was a pleasure getting to work with you. I will be sure to refer any peers seeking admissions counsel your way.”

“Thank you for your support. Without your help and advice I doubt I will be here – got into INSEAD andLBS! I am 99% sure I will choose INSEAD, so starting in Fonty after the summer! A dream come true really. All the best and I will recommend your services going forward!”

“Just got a call from [Columbia Business School] admissions with an official acceptance! Thanks for all your help, Paul! You really strengthened my essays and story, and made the whole application process a lot easier and less stressful.”

“Just wanted to let you know I got into Wharton. I got the email at 8 am. I couldn’t have done it without you. Thank you,”

“I got admitted at INSEAD, starting in France this August! Thank you again for all your invaluable help without which I would have struggled to achieve this outcome that I am very happy with. I shall recommend your service going forward.”

“Hi, I was accepted by MIT [Sloan]!!! Though it was a terrible long wait without many interview invites, I am really happy about the result. I really appreciate your critiques and support along the way.”

“Hi, I just wanted to let you know that I have been accepted to Wharton! Thank you so much for your help throughout this process! … Thanks again!! :)”

“Hi, Just a quick note to let you know I got in at both INSEAD and Columbia! I am still hesitating between the two but will probably go for INSEAD. Many thanks for your great help! (recommending you for all my intake sep 20XX colleagues)”

“Hi, Sorry, I could not get back to you earlier. I was out of town. I got into Wharton. I thought your input to the Wharton third essay was especially good. I will send you an update shortly. Thanks a lot.”

“Hi, Extremely sorry for the delayed response. I got through stanford [GSB]! And I can’t thank you enough for your help, without which it would not have been possible. I wanted to tell u the day I got the call but unfortunately I was Travelling to the hinterlands, where I had no email connectivity…. Please accept my heartfelt thanks and gratitude for your help. Thanks a ton.”

“I am going to London Business School this fall — and very much looking forward to it! I was offered a LBS Annual Fund Scholarship and a Forte Foundation Scholarship there — I also was accepted atCambridge.”

“ I applied to 5 schools and received 4 acceptances and 1 waitlist. I am excited to attend HBS [Harvard Business School] in the Fall! Thanks for your help, and I really appreciated the information in your book. It really helped me focus my essay strategy, especially on the Booth powerpoint tips and sample essay analysis. Thanks!”

“[Admitify consultant], I just got the call from Stanford. I’m in!!! I’ll follow up with more later, but thank you so much for all your help along the way. It’s been a journey, and I’m glad I had you to lean on throughout.”

“Great news! I’m in at [Chicago] Booth! The early phone call was a well received surprise. Thank you…for your support along the way. [Later] Gentlemen, I received a surprise phone call from West Philadelphia on Thursday morning. I was accepted off of the waitlist at Wharton and we are Philly-bound. Thanks again for all of your help and support.”

“Thanks for your message. I am happy to report that I got accepted to [MIT] Sloan. I am starting this month…. I appriciate [sic] the assistance. Take care.”

“I’m currently on a business trip so I couldnt inform you earlier. I just wanted to tell you that……………..I’m in!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I truly appreciate your unqualified support throughout the application process. I couldnt have made it without you. You really changed me life!” [Admitted atColumbia and London Business School]

“Hi, How r u? Hope you are good. You would be happy to know that I have made it Stanford GSB andYale SOM…. Thanks a lot for your help and guidance. Wanted to talk to you. Let me know some time. Thanks and Regards”

“Hi, I would like to report the current status of my MBA applications….
Accepted: Wharton, Kellogg [Northwestern]
Still waiting to hear: MIT, Columbia (I had an interview with both schools)
Rejected: HBS
Finally, I am waitlisted at Stanford! … Without your help, I don’t think I could get in both Wharton and Kellogg. [Later:] MIT Sloan accepted me! Again, thank you so much for you help”

“Hi, Thanks for following up. Apologies for the delay. I got into HBS [Harvard Business School]! I am ecstatic to say the least. It is honestly a dream come true. Really appreciate your guidance and perspective w/r/t interview prep. Happy holidays!… Thank you! Will definitely recommend you to future applicants. Best,”

“Dear [Admitify consultant], Thank God, I got an admission from [Chicago] Booth!! I really appreciate your help. I still can’t believe that!!”

“Dear [Admitify consultant], Just a quick note to tell you the good news!!! I received a call this morning from INSEAD. I am starting in Fontainebleau in January. Thank you again, I really enjoyed working with you and deeply believe that my chances of getting in increased by working with you. Thanks a million”

“Hello, I wanted to let you know that HBS [Harvard Business School] has sent me an interview invitation. I want to thank you for your help. My application would not have been successful without your insights! … Best,”

“Hi – Thank you for the message! Yes, I have exciting news to share >> I was just admitted to Kellogg!! Very excited because Kellogg jumped WAY to the top of my list after my February interview and class visit. They have an incredible marketing / analytics program, strong student culture, and deep entertainment media connections… Thanks again for working with me. Your guidance was so incredibly helpful. I’m relieved that we were able to combat my lower GPA with stronger essays, professional achievements, interviews etc. It feels like the weight of the world was lifted from my shoulders this afternoon! ADMITTED
– Northwestern Kellogg
UC Berkeley Haas
NYU Stern
Thank you!” … [later] I’m … super excited because I confirmed Kellogg earlier this week. My top choice school so I couldn’t be happier….Good news: Kellogg awarded me a 1/4 tuition scholarship yesterday ($28K).”

Kellogg accepted with $100K scholarship!!! Thanks so much for your help Paul!!… [Later] Happy Holidays Paul! I got into [Dartmouth] Tuck as well. I decided on Kellogg since I got the generous scholarship there (still in disbelief I got it). The handwritten note I got with the scholarship mentioned a couple things in my app that impressed them. They mentioned my impact on [his NGO] which I think came from my letter of rec from [recommender’s name] (since I didn’t talk much about [NGO] in my essays). Thanks sooooo much for your help with editing that letter. Are there any websites/forums where you would like me to leave a review of your services? Would be glad to leave a strong referral. Best wishes,”

“Tuck – We’re In! Hi Paul, Just got the call from [Dartmouth] Tuck this morning. Very exciting news. Decision season is off to a great start!… [Later] Wharton – We’re In! I’m thrilled. Let’s talk soon… [Later] In other news – I just got a call from [Chicago] Booth too. We’re in! All in all an incredible result.”

“I have been accepted at Chicago [Booth], Duke [Fuqua], and Carnegie Mellon [Tepper]. I have decided to join Chicago this fall…. I am happy joining Chicago as it was my first choice… Thanks for your help on the essay.”

“Hi, I should have informed you a little bit earlier that I have been admitted to Wharton and Chicago [Booth]…. I appreciate very much your help. Without it I would not have achieved so much. No question about that. Thank you very much. I will keep you updated about where I’ll go in the future. Thanks again!”

“Made it! Made it! Made it!!! [into Wharton] SO excited ‘:)) … Got a scholarship too- for $16K. The moment keeps getting better … [later] Kellogg 1Y– made it! Nice to have a choice now :)) … [later] [Chicago] Booth? Yes- made it. So 3/3 … Hey – Thought I will give you the final update. Have finally paid the deposit for Wharton :)..was confused between Kellogg 1Y and Wharton, but decided to go with my gut! Also received a positive decision from INSEAD yesterday, though I plan to politely decline. Lastly and most importantly, this positive outcome is all thanks to our team work, so a big THANKS to you for your pointed feedback, fast response time, amazing professionalism and very valuable guidance. Do let me know if I can be of any help in spreading the word around about your work or talking to new potential clients. It was great great pleasure working with you! Thanks much for your help Cheers,”

“Hello, Just to let you know, I got into Wharton too [in addition to MIT Sloan]. As you can imagine, I’m having a tough time deciding between the two. So any free advice you can offer will be most welcome! Thanks for all the valuable inputs and suggestions.”

“Hi Paul, I got into Booth and Kellogg!!! Thank you! I’m finally going to B school :)…. [Later]Yes, I got into MIT Sloan! I’m very excited about the news.”

“Just got into [Northwestern] Kellogg! I am leaning towards Wharton over Kellogg and UCLA. Thanks again for all your help.”

Yes! I’m in [at Wharton]!!! Woohoo! I still can’t believe it…Thank you! It was the first app that I worked on, and your template really helped!… I also got into Chicago [Booth] today so I guess that’s not so bad.”

“Great news! I got admitted to the [Chicago] Booth 20XX Weekend MBA Program. Thanks again for all your help. I couldn’t have done it without you. Best,”… [LinkedIn testimonial:] Paul is an excellent option for everyone looking for an edge in their business school applications.”

“I got into Wharton [EMBA]!!!!. I want to thank you for all the help you provided. I am extremely grateful for your efforts. Not only I owe a lot to you for my admit at Wharton, but also for the sponsorship pitch you helped me with. Because of your inputs I was able to secure full sponsorship from my employer. Working with you was a pleasure. You made me realize so many subtle things about myself along the journey. I think you are the most professional person I have ever come across. All my questions were answered to the point without any ambiguity and with utmost honesty. I would not have made it to Wharton without your help. At the time I had self-doubt and asked you if I should apply to another school, your answer impressed me “I think you can stick with Wharton and if it does not work then we will think about another school”. This shows how well versed and experienced you are, any other person would have said sure go ahead. At some point of time I would like to personally meet you to convey my gratitude. Thanks again for everything.”

“Hi, Thank you for your email. I apologize I just got this message… I really appreciated your help [with my Harvard Business School application], … [it] was a factor in my admission. Thanks,”

Chicago [Booth] at last! Thank you again Paul and happy holidays!”

“Dear [Admitify consultant], This is the best e-mail I have received so far!!! [Admission to Stanford Program in International Legal Studies] I think I don’t have to apply for the remaining two law schools … now. =P Still waiting for Harvard’s decision but thank you sooooo much for all your help!!

“Hi, I just got admitted to [Chicago] Booth from the wait-list!! YAY! Best,”

“Dear [Admitify consultant], I received a phone call from Columbia’s AdCom today accepting me into their program! I had applied for their Early decision. I also received a follow up email indicating my acceptance into the 2-year MBA program but looks like there is no link to pay the deposit or confirm acceptance. Can you please advise me on the next steps. As you know, I have Wharton, MIT and Stern interviews scheduled over the coming weeks. Thanks a ton!”

“Hi, I have been accepted to UCLA with a 30k USD scholarship. … [later:] As for ‘being on a roll,’ I also got a call from [Chicago [Booth]] today. … [later:] Admitted to Nyu stern too. :))”

“Hello, I have received an admit from London Business School! I am very happy about it, as LBS was really my dream school. Thank you again for all your help and advice throughout the process, from resume to essays to interview preparation. It certainly made a significant difference.”

“I am really excited and had to share, this morning I was admitted to the Wharton School of Business! [My wife] and I couldn’t ask for a better Christmas present.”

“Hello, I also got a [acceptance] call from [Dartmouth] Tuck this morning. At this point, would you recommend me which school is best choice for me among Chicago [Booth], Columbia [Business School] and Tuck? Especially, I have much difficulty in deciding the school between Columbia and Chicago. Let me hear from you soon. Thank you!” … [Later:] Happy new year! I hope you are vey well! This morning I got email from Ross. I got accepted to Michigan Ross. I want to thank you again.”

“Hi, I have some good news – got into HBS [Harvard Business School]!! Sorry for my delayed email, I was in transit to Asia and got to know this morning. This is a dream come true! I cannot express how thankful I am to you for this. I am 100% certain I would not have got in without your help and advice. You are absolutely fantastic at what you do! If there’s any recommendation I can write for you or anything I can help you with please do not hesitate to ask me. Thank you very much!”

“Dear, I got accepted at couple of programs and selected Chicago Booth [EMBA] and the course work starts on 17th. … I should say, it was a pleasure working with you and we plan to use your services in future (for my cousin). If you wish me to leave any recommendations on your service on any websites, please feel free to let me know. Thanks for all your help….I am very much satisfied with your feedback and guidance.”

“Well, I have great news. I was accepted into the Wharton School this morning!!!! I am going to enroll in Wharton’s program. This is my first choice. Anyway, thanks so much for your help. It was invaluable!!!”

“[Admitify consultant] was just awesome! He first took time (over 2 hours) just talking to me about my goals and finding out stories about my life, which we could use in the essays. He then made sure I understood where my application stood; I had good grades and good work ex, but a mediocre GMAT score. He stressed that I had to write really good essays so I could make up for the GMAT score. After each draft of the essays he would give constructive feedback. I can easily say that if I had not hired Paul as a counselor I would not be attending Yale [SOM]! Thank you, I can’t recommend your services enough.”

“I got into the Wharton EMBA program. I wanted to let you know. Thanks again for all your help. Best”

“Hi, I got admitted into CBS [Columbia] this week, really happy and thankful for your great help!”

“I wanted to let you know I was accepted to MIT this afternoon. In no small part was this a result of all the advice and guidance throughout the application process.”

“Indeed, I have been informed that I have been accepted to INSEAD! Very happy and relieved, now looking forward to an entirely new experience in the next year. Thank you for your patience, diligence, sharp editing and effective advice. I am entirely sure that my chances of getting in without your help would have been far more tenuous. Thanks for helping me to come across at my best.”

“Your services were really a great help. I don’t think I would have made it [into Wharton] without the polishing of my essays by you.”

“I have just been admitted [at Columbia Business School]! I should say WE have just been admitted! Thank you very much Paul. You are a key success factor person. I will keep you informed about my decision to go there and recommend you to any candidate I will come across. [Later:] I have just been awarded the R.C.Kopf fellowship from CBS, which is a merit-based full-tuition financial aid. This let you know about the already excellent ROI of my work with you. I hope you are fine.”

“I heard from Wharton and learnt that I got accepted. I wanted to drop you a quick note to thank you for all your help. I could not have done it without your help. Thanks once again.”

“I wanted to let you know that I’ve been accepted to the Kellogg School [Northwestern]. I can’t thank you enough for helping me make my essays shine. Your experience and know how was truly evident. It was a pleasure.”

“I get in Wharton and really appreciate your great help! Let me know what I can help, say writing a testmonial [sic] for you or sth?”

“ACCEPTED at Wharton!!! Hi Paul, it took a long time – weekends, evenings, flights and all – but I did it! I’m absolutely thrilled that I was accepted into Wharton AND their Health Care Management (HCM) program… . I got the phone call Friday. Wanted to let you know though – you were along for a good chunk of the ride. Feel free to use me as a reference. Thanks again for all the emails and extra time you put into my application journey. WAHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh yeah – forgot to mention that I was also awarded a Kaiser Fellowship ($8,000) from Wharton. Not bad right? Happy Holidays!”

“I’m IN!!! [at INSEAD] Just got a call from [name], email tomorrow and mail package next week! Thank you for all your help! Essays, interviews! You’ve been a huge factor in this process!!! How should I thank you?”

“I’m accepted to Wharton. You helped significantly so thank you.”

“Dear [Admitify consultant], Your reviews were fantastic, and so was your book – especially the questions that helped me better articulate the work I’ve done and the impact that’s been created because of it. I got into both Columbia [Business School] [attending] and INSEAD. Got an interview with Tuck – which I think went very well – but I fell short of understanding the program in greater depth, and it did not fall in line with my goals. Keep on rocking! Best regards,”

“Hi, Great news! I got admitted to [Berkeley] Haas! The interview went really well and it gave me confidence I actually had a good chance to get in. I got the good news phone call from adcom yesterday. I want to thank you again for your great advice, feedback and suggestions during the entire application process. The mock interview and feedback really prepared me well for the interview. Getting into Haas was more like a dream initially where I felt I had to a least give it a shot. I’m happy I did! It’s also great to see that a school like Haas will look beyond GMAT, GPA numbers to make admission decisions. Thanks again”

“I have received admission calls from both [Berkeley] HAAS and [UCLA] Anderson. Well and well, I do not know how to express my appreciation to you, but I clearly know it is to the large extent the essays under your editing and polishing that helped me walk into the doors to both schools.”

“Thanks for the edits during my appying [sic] process. This morning I heard from Wharton that I have been accepted. I don’t think I would have made it without your edits.”

“I wanted to share the awesome news – I have been accepted to the [University of Chicago] Booth Class of 20XX. I am very very excited and grateful to you … for your help. Thank you Paul for the guidance and for answering every stupid question I had about the WL strategy. Have a great day! Regards,”

“As mentioned earlier, [Chicago] Booth is my top choice both for professional and personal reasons which is why I wanted the best consultant (you) in the industry to be on my side.” [Admitted off wait-list at Booth]

“I am IN at Duke!!!Thank you so much for your support Paul. I am thrilled to have received the admission from Duke. I am just very happy right now! … Thank you for all your excellent guidance, Paul. Couldn’t have gotten this results without you.”

“[Admitify consultant] is quite simply an incredibly smart and concise consultant who provides very timely and well thought out advice. Without ever having a regret, I have religiously trusted his views, insights and recommendations. You would be wise to hire him!” [Admitted by Northwestern Kellogg]

“Got the call just now from Chicago [Booth]! Paul, thank you so much!”

“Hey, Just got a call from the Kellogg admissions office, inviting me to join the class of 2013. Thank you for your guidance and counsel through the process. Much appreciation & warm regards,”

“Hi, I just received a call from Felicia Goodman and she gave me the news that I got admitted intoColumbia [Business School]. That’s obviously great news and I’m so happy. I would also like to thank you tremendously for your help…. Again I HIGHLY appreciate all the help and will recommend you to anyone applying to an MBA. … Thanks,”

“Hi, I’m so excited to give you the good news: got into [Chicago] Booth!! With a 20k merit scholarship too! So happy, relieved and grateful for the acceptance and thank you for playing such a huge role in it! *Thank you!* The news is just sinking in – and now there’s so much to do! Let me good times roll… Thank you for your invaluable support through every step…….you have been like a genie, a godsend to me during this crucial time. This application process means so much to me because I feel like an MBA will help bring me closer to my destiny. And it would not have happened without your support….Thank you! I will *highly* recommend you to my friends…. Cheers,”

“Hi, I just received a call from Felicia Goodman and she gave me the news that I got admitted intoColumbia [Business School]. That’s obviously great news and I’m so happy. I would also like to thank you tremendously for your help…. Again I HIGHLY appreciate all the help and will recommend you to anyone applying to an MBA. … Thanks,”

“Hi, I am well and hope you are fine as well. Thanks to your help, I did get admitted and am enrolled [atWharton EMBA].”

“Just wanted to let you know that I was accepted at [Northwestern] Kellogg today….I wanted to thank you for all of your help. It was greatly appreciated.”

“Hi, I’m in at Stanford MSx, and Wharton with $$$ [$80K]! Thank you so much. Without all your help and support, i can never get where i am today! i now need to decided [sic]… Thank YOU Paul! Best,”

“Another admit!!!!!!!!! I can’t believe it!!!! You shed light on my life once again!! Thank you so much.
Now I even have the luxury to choose between two top schools [Columbia Business School andLondon Business School]. Its unbelievable but an awesome feeling anyway. I think I’ll need your help again for my brother and friends in Korea as they will be applying next year… Thanks again!”

“Hi, A bit delayed in responding to the email, since I had limited access to the net past few days. I am glad to share the happy news, I did get admitted to [Duke] Fuqua during the Early Action Round. Very excited!! All the hardwork paid off. It seems like my story struck a chord with the admissions. Best,”

“Dear [Admitify consultant], i got ADMITTED TO INSEAD!!!!! i just got the email! … Best, [admitted with 610 GMAT]… [LinkedIn testimonial:] I bumped into Paul Bodine’s book “Great Applications for Business School” by chance on a casual visit to the NYU library in November 2012, when the idea of applying for an MBA was still in the early stages. Then, I knew very little about what the process of applying for Business School entailed. The book itself was terrific. I read it all on my flight back to London and upon my arrival, I started jotting down my essays. The book gave me a great starting point, but I felt that I needed to dig deeper with my stories. I wanted to nail the essays 100%: explain my story and the strong reasons behind my application. So, I contacted Paul via his website and started working with him in February 2013. The collaboration with Paul was no doubt the best decision I have taken in regards to my MBA application. Not only for his expertise in writing and editing essays, but also for his deep and extensive knowledge of business schools in America and abroad. Through him, I developed a better understanding of the top-end business schools, their difference approach to candidates and the type of profiles which certain schools might be looking for. I have realised that the personal story of the applicant and his/her post-MBA goals are actually quite important factors in choosing a business school. Before meeting Paul, I had not decided exactly which school to apply to, and through his support and advice I applied to INSEAD which turned out to be a great choice. I just came back from the Admit Welcome Day and could not be more enthusiastic! All through our collaboration, Paul has been ever-present, patiently answering my questions and reassuring my doubts. Even though I am based in London, the time difference was never a problem. Paul has never missed an email from me, nor a Skype call. Applying for an MBA is a long and often challenging practise and I am grateful to Paul for making the whole process not only easier and less stressful, but more effective towards the final goal (getting admitted!). He is truly an all-round, highly knowledgeable Professor, and a key player in my application. I could not recommend him more.”

“”Hi Paul, I got into INSEAD!!!!! Thank you for the amazing help on my essays, I couldn’t have even thought of getting in without it. This is huge for me considering my [undergraduate] record. I will be attending hopefully so won’t be applying anywhere else. Regards,”

““Yesterday I have been accepted on the INSEAD EMBA program! No more work on the application/essays and back to school in a few months:) Thank you for all your help and support: the essays really made a difference to my application and everyone I have spoken to at INSEAD made this comment. I am deeply grateful for your support, insights, and terrific help in turning around my raw stories into powerful essays. Best regards & many thanks!”

“Hi, I just heard from [Northwestern] Kellogg about a week ago that I have been accepted to the 4-Q program starting June 20. Just wanted to thank you for all your help on the essays…. Thanks again.”

“Hi, I received admission to Columbia MBA this morning. Thank you very much for all your support. I am quite excited to begin my new adventure in 2016,”

“Hi, I just wanted to let you know that I got an acceptance call from Columbia this morning! Thank you very much for all your help. I really appreciate Best regards,”

“I am “IN” at [New York University] Stern – just got the news. I like this school, it is ‘right up my alley’ and it is a great school for finance…. THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU.”

“Hi, Wanted to let you know that I have heard back from several schools and things are going quite well. I am now in to Berkeley [Haas], [Chicago] Booth and Columbia [Business School]!…Thanks very much for all of your help, your advice has been invaluable. Thanks,… [Later] Hi Paul, Heard fromKellogg, and I am in with a 100k scholarship. Very exciting!… Also, happy to write an honest and highly positive review on Amazon, will do so in the next day or two. Thanks,”

“I wanted to share exciting news and a big appreciation for you! I got an interview with HBS [Harvard Business School]!!!! I found out yesterday and signed up for an on-campus interview on Monday, Nov. 4th. I KNOW that this (big progress from two years ago) speaks to all your guidance, insight, support, and TIME these past few months! THANK YOU! I’m so excited and feel super empowered about working really hard to prepare and put my best self out there for the next stage! MUCH appreciation,”

“I have been accepted to Wharton and Chicago [Booth] – I stopped the Stern process. I just wanted to thank you once again for your precious comments, they have been invaluable. Also, your book really helped me write my essays, I would recommend it to anybody! It definitively gave me a clear idea of how to structure and write the essays. I couldn’t have made it without you – thanks a million! [Name], a very grateful future MBA student”

“Hi, I can’t wait to share with you that I just received a call from Columbia to offer me a position in the class of 2017. I don’t think this will happen without your help. I am forever grateful for it. Thank you very much…. Great thanks for accompanying me along the application process. Forever grateful. I hope can have chance to visit you in the states some time next year. All the best,”

“Hi How are you ? I got a call from INSEAD admission office today. I start at the Fonty campus in January!!! Once again my heartfelt thanks to you for helping me through the application Words can not express how much I valued your counsel and help. Very very elated at this. Cheers !”

“Hi, I was ultimately offered places at all of the schools to which I applied (INSEAD, Oxford [Said],Cambridge [Judge], LBS [London Business School]) including scholarships at LBS and Cambridge. Ultimately I decided INSEAD was the best fit for me and my family, but it was sure nice being able to choose between such great options. Thanks for your help with my essays – I remember thinking they were close to complete when we first got in touch, but the ones I ultimately submitted were not even comparable. Your constructive but honest feedback helped a lot in making this happen. Best regards,”

“Paul, I heard back from MIT [Sloan] – I’m in. I can’t thank you enough for all the help you provided with my applications. I’m now in the position of deciding between MIT, Kellogg, and opting out of business school entirely. … Thanks again for all the help.”

“Dear [Admitify consultant], I wanted to tell you that I was accepted to Harvard Law School: thank you for everything! Best regards,”

“Hi: Happy new year! Up to now, I have already got offers from Duke [Fuqua], Michigan [Ross],Cornell [Johnson] and Northwestern(Kellogg) I am on the waiting list of Chicago Booth. I was rejected by Darden after interview, and I did not get the interview invite from NYU. Thank you very very much for your helping; without you, I cannot make it. Keep in contact. Best Regards”

“Hi, … I would be more than happy to serve as a reference for you…. today I got my acceptance letter from Uof Michigan(Ann arbor) [Ross]. Thanks for the great work and help on the application. so now it is a difficult decision for me to choose between chicago [Booth] and michigan. any suggestions?”

Just received the admit call [from Berkeley Haas EWMBA]. Thank you for all your help, especially for wonderful essay editing services. I don’t think I could done it without your guidance on the essays and LORs. Thank you again!”

“Hi, I’m in [Yale SOM]! I’m so happy! Thank you for everything! Cheers,”

“Hi, I wanted to let you know that I got into [Duke] Fuqua on Thursday, with a scholarship. … [Later:] Sitting nicely going into the afternoon: Yes: Wharton, Virginia, Duke … Good news keeps coming!” [Later:] Got into Kellogg as well 🙂

“Hi Paul, … I wanted to share with you that I’ve been offered admittance to Columbia…. In addition to admittance they have selected me as the recipient of the David Gill fellowship which covers full tuition. So, the best result possible! I can’t really believe it. Thanks very much for your help!… [Later] I’m incredibly fortunate to have been awarded a full-tuition fellowship by CBS, and $35k per year from[Chicago] Booth (still waiting on Wharton). … [Later] Just got the call. I’ve been admitted to Wharton! And that’s the end of Round 2 for me. …Thanks for the help!

“Hi, got the news from [Michigan] Ross:) i am in !!!! thank you so much for all your help. i would not be accepted without you!!!! Thank you Paul for what you did for me. I believe you are the best – bold and smart approach.”

“Hi, Today, I received a phone call from INSEAD and I am admitted!!!!! I don’t think I could have done this without your help. Thank you so much Paul – today is one of the best days in my entire life. I am so excited … INSEAD is pretty much the top school in my list. … Best regards,”… [Later] Hi Paul, I wanted to update you regarding the final results. I am admitted to INSEAD, [Duke] Fuqua, [NYU] Stern, and [Dartmouth] Tuck!!… Thank you so much Paul again for enabling my dream!! I was really humbled with the final result. Best,”

“Paul, You need no introduction! Things worked out very well- I was accepted [at Chicago Booth]! Thanks once again for helping me – you did an outstanding job… Thanks”

“Hi Paul, I GOT IN KELLOGG! Thanks for all your help Best,”

“It turned out great. I got into Chicago [Booth] and will be attending this Fall!”

“I ended up getting into Columbia, Kellogg and Wharton! Will probably go to Wharton – thank you for all the help!”

“You were extremely methodical in your approach to crafting a waitlist letter. You knew exactly what the admissions committee would look for and came up with an action plan that was packed with items to address weaknesses in my application. The preinterview you conducted with me was in-depth and to the point. You covered everything in details that were enough to craft a wonderful outline that I used to write the final letter. Your editing services were superior as well – we were able to turn out the final copy (after multiple edits) in 2 days flat. Your excellent editing skills and patience combined with your uncanny knowledge of how to craft content relevant to the situation made you the perfect consulatant [sic] for me. I would definitely use you … again and would gladly recommend you to anyone who asked.” [Admitted toChicago Booth]

“Hello, I wanted to tell you that I got admitted to INSEAD‘s MBA program and I will be starting in Jan.”

“thanks for the note. Glad to report I just heard from Wharton and it was a yes! I’m very excited and it’s quite a relief. Still very anxious for tomorrow… [Next day:] HBS [Harvard Business School] – I GOT IN!!!”

“Hello, Sorry I have not written earlier. I can happily report that I was admitted to [New York University]Stern towards the middle of June… I had actually already had movers set to take my stuff to LA, so needless to say everything worked out in the end. Thank you again for your support and I hope all is well.”

“Hi, I’m very happy to let you know I got into UC Berkeley [Haas] and Santa Clara. … I’ll be attending Berkeley in the Fall! They were just ranked in the Top 10 by US News, so I’m thrilled. Thanks for your help!”

“Hi, I hope you are doing well. I apologize for the lack of communication. I want to give you a few updates. I got an admit into Kellogg [MBA]. I am very grateful for all your help. I would not have been able to do it without all your help…. Thanks again for all your help.”

“Your input was surely instrumental in getting my application up to snuff.” [Admitted at Wharton/Lauder]

“Here are the results for [my spouse] and I…. We are in at Wharton, UofC [Chicago Booth], andNorthwestern [Kellogg]…. We appreciate all your help through this process thus far and would recommend your service to anyone seriously going after the top schools. Your guidance was invaluable and made all the difference in such a competitive year…Thanks again.”

“Made itttttttttttttttt [into Michigan Ross]. Extremely happy .. Could have never done this without you ..thanks a lot for all the help and support ..
Let me know if you need any recommendation or testimonial from my side … I ll sign in blood endorsing you .. Regards,”

“Dear [Admitify consultant], Thanks for the message. I am happy to share with you that INSEAD did indeed come through for me, but they kept on the wait list for quite some time. I will be starting in January, and finishing in December… Is there anything that I can do for you? Regards,”

“Hi, Thanks for the support. I am very excited with LBS [London Business School] and the opportunity to live in London. Best regards,”

“I … got my first admit this week, to [Michigan] Ross. Otherwise, … I’m waiting to hear back from Darden and Booth, and I have an interview with Stern on [date]. Thanks for all of your help and I’ll let you know how things turn out and where I end up going…. [Later] I got into [Chicago] Booth off the waitlist! Thanks again for your help!”

“Hi, Dream comes true……I am accepted by Oxford [Said MBA] finally! Thanks very much for your advice! Best,”

“Dear [Admitify consultant], I have spent some weeks devouring your book “Great Applications for Business Schools”. The advice and student essay examples have been immensely helpful to me, and I thank you for making this information so accessible!… [Later:] Hello Paul, Thanks for your note. I got into both schools [Wharton EMBA and Berkeley Haas EMBA] – hooray! I have quite a good problem to decide which one. Thanks for your help with the applications! Best,”

“Hi, … I was going to write you an email. I got into [Western Ontario] Ivey, IE, ESADE, [SDA] Bocconi, INSEAD & [Toronto] Rotman with scholarships. I interviewed at Harvard, Booth and Kellogg but denied at all. I am retaking my GMAT [610] but only next week…. Thanks for all your help.”

“You definitely stand out of the crowd of admissions consultants. … I got accepted in HEC-Paris. I am very happy for this news for which you got a huge credit: your book and the way you guide us as lectors, helped me show my potential, vision, integrity and leadership.”

“Thanks. It still up in the air. I will probably end up choosing Chicago [Booth] over Michigan [Ross].”

“The results have been as follows: MIT [Sloan] – admit, Wharton – WL and HBS – ding. Thanks for all your help and guidance.”

“Hi, How have you been? I wanted to let you know that I was accepted to the Duke daytime MBA program in R2 and that I decided to accept. … I am really pleased with the opportunities and experience that Duke provides and I am looking forward to moving to Durham next month. As I have mentioned before, you have been very kind and generous with your time. I am very grateful. If there is ever anything I can do for you, do let me know.”

“Hi, Good Morning ! Finally, yesterday heard that I have been admitted to the Berkeley Haas part-time MBA program. I am really ecstatic. Can’t thank you enough for your perseverance in supporting me over the past year. Your guidance, feedback and strong support have been singularly critical in enabling me to reach here. Can you please email me your mailing address; want to send you a thank you note….[LinkedIn testimonial:] Simply loved working with Paul over the last three years. He is very intuitive, patient and has a very keen eye for detail. Paul has had a solid contribution in my efforts to get into a top business school. Thank you!”

“Paaaaaaaaul, We’re iiiiiiiiiinnnn!!!! [Cornell Johnson MBA] OMG I don’t know how to thank you. Thank you thank you thank you for everything… I would have never been here today without you. With few words and a great sensibility you lifted me up each time. You have been extremely professional and with an incredible sense of ethics. My essays were 100 times better after your edits, but they were mine, every single word was mine — this is magic… And you were the first to know today (my mom could not take my call immediately :)) because you are my TEAM :))) …[later] Innnnnnnn [at UCLA Anderson]! You have no idea of how happy I am for this one. I did not sleep tonight to wait for the result:)))) Thank you from my heart…. [later] [NYU] Stern … Said Yes!!! now I’m in real trouble ps. It was one of our stretch schools:) thaaaaank you … I can’t believe I’m kind of done now, I’m really happy, but I really enjoyed working with you. Cheers,”… [LinkedIn Testimonial:] I had the privilege of working with Paul on my business school applications, and I can say that it is rare to come across such an amazing, knowledgeable and reliable professional. Paul was extremely helpful in the schools selection and the strategizing of my applications. I was particularly impressed with Paul’s deep expertise, professional ethics and incredibly positive attitude.”

“Hello, I am pleased to tell you that I have been accepted in the NYU Stern-Langone program. Thank you very much for your help for the application process.”

“Hello– hope all is well and hope you’re getting ready to enjoy the 4th of July weekend. My apologies for the delayed response – after the whole b-school app ordeal I decided to take some time off and travel so I’m just starting to dig my way through correspondence. So ultimately I was accepted into Michigan [Ross] and UNC [Kenan-Flagler], and my goal was to get into a Top 15 school so I’m extremely grateful with how the whole process worked out given the short amount of time I had to do everything. I also wanted to thank you for all your guidance and support you provided on all my applications as well as the interviews, I truly appreciate all the feedback and thoughts, they definitely helped me think about the applications in a better way. So after giving it much serious thought and spending extensive time at both campus and talking to many many students from both schools I ultimately made the decision to accept UNC’s offer. They were generous enough to offer me a scholarship … Once again Paul, thank you for all the advice you provided over the last few months, I’m so happy this entire ordeal has come to an end and even happier with the new path I’m about to take, and you definitely played a big part in that. I’m more than happy to recommend you to anyone I come across who is considering going through the b-school process. Best,”

“Hi Paul I own you a big THANK YOU! [O]ur follow up letter helps me so much. I just got call from [Michigan] Ross. I am in!! Super excited, I want to ask you some suggestions about what to do next. When would be a good time to call you ? Thanks”

“Hi, I was accepted to IE International MBA program starting this Fall! Thanks for all your help and support.”

“Hi …It gives me immense joy to inform you that I got the call from Kellogg [Northwestern]!!! … the news from Kellogg was exactly what the doctor ordered…. Thanks for sharing your words of wisdom with me throughout the application journey and esp. for preparing me so well for the Kellogg D-Day. I’m indebted to you … Many thanks!”

“Got a ding from Kellogg, but admits from [Michigan] Ross and [Dartmouth] Tuck Couldn’t be happier!!!!”

“Hi, I received my second acceptance letter today from [University of Virginia] Darden. Just wanted to let you know and thank you again for your help with my applications. Talk to you soon.”

“Thanks a lot [on admission to Chicago Booth]. [Name ofPaul Bodine Consulting / Admitify consultant] is a great guy to work with. Thanks for your recommendation.”

“Dear [Admitify consultant], I’ve been accepted to [Cambridge] Judge! I wouldn’t have got accepted without your help! Thank you so much. Best,”

“Hi, Yes I have heard back, and they [INSEAD MBA]] offered me a place I’m in! sorry for the late reply, but work has been crazy lately. Thank you for reviewing those essays, you helped me bring in richer content… Anyway, I’m happy I got in unconditionally, given my GMAT 680 and low quantitative (70%): they didn’t ask me to retake the GMAT (INSEAD usually does), but asked me (optional) to join a session for one week to enhance my quantitative. All, in all, it went well, I appreciate your help and I’ll be happy to answer any questions you may heave about INSEAD. Best regards,”

“Hi, … I got a call for cornell [EMBA]. I wanted to take this opportunity to thank you for your help. Thanks”

“I was intervied [sic] and eventually offered admission to UT [Texas at Austin]. I accepted the invitation and started the program about a month ago. Needless to say, school has been great. You were an important part of my acceptance and I just wanted to let you know how thankful I am. I’m extremely satisfied with your counceling [sic] and editing help, and specially with your patience to get the job done with deadlines upon us.”

“Even better news! …. Last Month I was accepted to the McCombs Graduate School of Business at the University of Texas and waitlisted at the Kellogg Graduate School of Business in Chicago. The [sic] afternoon I was told I had been accepted at [Northwestern] Kellogg!!!… Kellogg is my first choice and therefore I will be turning down the offer of admission that University of Texas extended me. So, it appears I will be moving to Chicago this Fall instead of Austin. The average temperature is only about 50 degrees cooler than Austin. Thanks again for [your] support and kind words of encouragement. I could not have done it without your help!”

“I really cannot believe we pulled it off AND you might have found me a new career in [field]! [MyCornell Johnson interviewer] told me I was the very first person she called yesterday! I just feel so happy and special! Once again, Thank you from the bottom of my heart for making my dream comes true. … [Also:] “Paul was WONDERFUL! I definitely would not have a chance at Cornell if I didn’t use Paul’s service and invaluable advice.”

“[Chicago] Booth called. I’m in. Not only that, they’re offering me a 20k per annum merit scholarship. I’m so psyched, for the first time in my life I’m at a loss for words in any language. =D Thanks for all the help over the last few months. It helped so very much, and I believe, made the difference. Without your advice, I really don’t think I would’ve made it. :-)”

“Hi, Just wanted to keep you in the loop. My final b-school admissions decisions were:
Wharton – admitted (on condition that I complete additional math prep work)
Michigan [Ross] – admitted
Columbia – waitlisted (adcom had concern w/ my low GMAT score)
Kellogg – waitlisted (adcom had concern w/ my quant abilities)
Cornell – withdrew app (was already accepted at Wharton …)
Harvard – denied
All in all, I was very pleased with the outcomes. I have made the decision to accept Wharton’s offer and will be asking Columbia and Kellogg to remove my name from their respective waitlists shortly…. Thank you for your incredibly useful and candid guidance during the application process. I truly believe my essays made the difference and would definitely use your services again if I were to do it all over…. THANK YOU!”

“Hi, I got accepted into [Michigan] Ross. … I’m very excited about Ross and meeting new people. I think this will be a refreshing start for me, and I’m grateful to have this opportunity. I truly appreciate your help. I couldn’t have made it through this process without your encouragement. Thank you again, and I wish you all my best as well!”

”I thought [Paul Bodine Consulting / Admitify consultant] helped quite a bit and am very pleased with her work. Admitted at UCLA [Anderson], waitlisted at Wharton, waiting to hear from [Berkeley] Haas. [Later admitted to Wharton] Regards,”

“Hi, I got acceptance calls from both Berkeley HAAS as well as UCLAAnderson. Thanks for working with me, it helped me a lot.”

“I got in [to Northwestern Kellogg EMBA]. Thanks for all your help.”

“Thank you so much for all the excellent support you provided. Finally, the wait is over. I am admitted to the Chicago GSBMBA program. The structural and syntactic refinement you brought into the essays really played a major role in the admission decision.”

“I’ve been admitted to [Duke] Fuqua. second round. Thanks again!”

“Dear [Admitify consultant]… I just wanted to thank you as I have received a call today from Columbia Business School to confirm my admission! It’s a great pleasure for me and I really believe that despite my high GMAT score and the rest of my resume I wouldn’t have been accepted due to a lack of challenge on my essays without you. Thank you again! And I look forward to working with you in the future on other potential candidacies.”

“Yesterday I received my admission for [Northwestern] Kellogg. Hooorrrrayy. It was a fantastic moment after all the efforts you and I had put into the whole thing. Also from my side: thank you very much for the great support and the good ideas and the excellent English that definitely helped me get into one of the leading business schools in the U.S. Your service was … worthwhile and paid off in the end. thanks a lot.”

“I wanted to thank you and especially wanted to bring to your attention the incredible experience I have had working with Paul [Bodine]. From 5 rejects in 2007 to 2 admits and 1 interview in 2008 it has been a great difference in my profile. Paul has helped me in everyway and has really boosted my candidacy. Thanks once again for all your help.” [Admitted by Duke (Fuqua)]

“I used your waitlisted services for the Univ of Chicago GSB. I’m glad to say that I just got accepted to the GSB this week and shall be attending school there. Thanks for all the help!”

“I must agree [your service] made a difference in my candidacy. I am glad to have worked with you…. [Admitted at INSEAD]

“I’ve been accepted at Wharton [and later Harvard Business School]. Still can’t believe it. I wanted to thank you … for your talents that got me the admission. In summary I got in Wharton because of four reasons listed below from the most important to the least important: 1. First and above all because God wanted that to happen. 2. 3. 4. I was intelligent enough to know I should consult … Paul, thank you for your valuable talents …, thank you for the service…it’s worth every penny.”

“Good news, I have been accepted by University of Michigan Business School [Ross]! Thank you so much for your tremendous help during my application process! I really appreciate your patience and extreme dedication. Again, thank you so much for the bottom of my heart! I`ll keep you posted when I have more good news.”

“I was accepted off [Northwestern] Kellogg’s wait list today. You helped me with all of my Kellogg essays and also with my Kellogg wait list letter. Your editing and comments really did made [sic] all the difference for me. Without your help I know that I would not have my Kellogg admit today. Thanks very much and your services were very much worth the investment I put into them.”

“Dear [Admitify consultant], I am happy to inform you that I have been accepted at [Michigan] Ross! i have a decision to make Cornell [Johnson] vs. Ross. … I have an important decision to make and would appreciate any thoughts you may have on this. Thank you for all your help in the tough process.”

“I’m off to Chicago [Booth]! I’m … going to enjoy preparing for a great school. Thanks for all your help. Let me know if you still want a formal testimonial, and in what format…”

“I got into the two European schools I applied to INSEAD and IE [Business School], Duke [Fuqua], and [Virginia] Darden. Going to Duke. Thanks for your help along the process. regards,”

“Hi, …. So, I decided to go Columbia Business School and am pretty happy about my status…. I always think that without your help, I can’t reach my goal. Thank you very much. …. Of course, whenever I have chances, I will refer my friends to you.”

“Hi, I got accepted to [Northwestern] Kellogg today!! Best,”

“Hi, I just checked the [UC Berkeley Haas part-time] application. I did get through! You were a blessing! Regards … [LinkedIn testimonial:] I worked with Paul for my business school essays and his editorial work was flawless. The recommendations he was able to give really helped me bring out the right message and elevated my material. Paul was always on time and went out of the way to help me through the process. I couldn’t have asked for more.”

“got in Wharton almost cried.. cant believe it. talk for 3 mins.. just to share my happiness.. my voice is still trembling … [later] I am awarded with Wharton fellowship worth 20k!”

“I got into in [NYU] Stern and [UNC] Kenan Flagler… I start at Stern this fall however and am excited. You [were] a huge help and I really appreciate it.”

“Dear [Admitify consultant], I’ve got an admission from Cornell Johnson early in this morning!! … Kinda busy right now but I just wanna say that I really appreciate all the things you’ve done with me! [later] Paul, one more good news! Admitted to LBS!! [London Business School] Thank you, Paul.”

“GOOD NEWS!! I got the ‘ADMIT’ call from Don Martin of Chicago GSB yesterday! So, I am headed for Chicago GSB! I thank you so much … for your excellent service. I shall definitely send in my ‘comments/​feedback’ and as I have told you before, I will be more than glad to be a ‘reference’.”

“It’s a yes [MIT Sloan MBA], just came in. Very excited, will let you know my thoughts and feelings tomorrow. Regards, and thanks,… And last but not least, I highly value the work you’ve done with me. Quick and efficient, exactly what I expected and needed at every stage. Thanks again. Where would you suggest that I post the positive feedback? Kind regards,”

“Admit News!! Hi, I hope you have been well. Apologies for not getting in touch earlier. I have some wonderful news!! I got admitted into Yale SOM last week. The big news came today though…I got the call for Kellogg JD MBA [Northwestern]!!!! I am really over the top elated right now. Thanks a ton for all your patience, encouragement and help throughout the process. You feedback on my Kellogg essays made a world of difference. Thanks a lot Paul! I hope you have a lovely Christmas and a great New Year… With lots of gratitude,”

“Hello, I …. have decided to attend The Fuqua School of Business at Duke University. … Thank you for all of your help Paul. You really helped me craft excellent essays.”

“Hi, Got the admission from Insead last week. I was on travelling and was just back to China to find the news. Thank you Paul very very much for all the helps and encouragement given during the application. Thank you very very much!!!”

“In at NYU [Stern]! Thanks for your help Paul. After a ding at my most likely school, followed by a waitlist at another school, my hopes for NYU were slim. With your help, I was able to get into my top choice!”

“Thanks for the note. To answer your question, I was wait listed by hbs (and ultimately wasn’t admitted) and accepted at Wharton, where I enrolled.”

“Hi, The final word is in from all 6 schools. If you don’t mind I would greatly appreciate your recommendation:
Duke [Fuqua]: Admitted [Later:] Duke gave me $36k
UCLA [Anderson]: Admitted
USC [Marshall]: Admitted
UT [McCombs]: Admitted
Stanford: Denied
… And anything you need as far as recommendations, I am happy to do. Thanks again,”

“I got into Columbia EMBA program (Look at my email id). Million thanks to you – not for writing my essays, but for teaching me. I believe I learned a lot from you about writing. I am proud because I learned and applied what I learned to craft my own essay.”

“Just a quick note to say that I’ve been offered admission to Wharton [and Dartmouth Tuck a few days later]!!! I’d just like to say thanks for all the help you provided me with. I am VERY pleased and immensely satisfied with the results [your service] has helped me to achieve. Thanks!!!!”

“To conclude: Paul’s output, editing quality and advices exceeded the expectations I had from an admission consultant… Paul’s biggest strength [is a], strong drive for perfection. I would recommend … Paul as the best consultant I worked with.” [Admitted at Northwestern Kellogg]

“I got offers from Georgetown [McDonough] and UCLA [Anderson] last week. And Georgetown even offers me a great tuition scholarship (40,000 dollars/year)! I am pretty happy with the results and won’t apply for other schools. I wanna thank you for your help along the way. I don’t think I can get these offers without your advices and editings. You really do great work on admission consulting! Thank you again!…I would like to thank you again for your efforts and help during my application. I think you are really professional and efficient and I would highly recommend you if someone seeks my advice on admission consulting.”

“Hi, I have great news! Today I received my acceptance to Northwestern’s IMC [Integrated Marketing Communications] MS program for fall of 2015. I could not have gotten in without the guidance of your great book and through the interview coaching session we did together so thank you for being a part of my application process! Cheers!… Also, FYI, I was also accepted out of 4 out of 5 schools I applied to. In addition to Northwestern I was also accepted to Temple, Bentley and DePaul’s MS in Marketingprograms as well.”

“Hi, I applied only to ISB [Indian School of Business] and I received the offer letter. Thank you for the support! Regards”

“Hi, I have great news! Today I received my acceptance to Northwestern’s IMC [Integrated Marketing Communications] MS program for fall of 2015. I could not have gotten in without the guidance of your great book and through the interview coaching session we did together so thank you for being a part of my application process! Cheers!… Also, FYI, I was also accepted out of 4 out of 5 schools I applied to. In addition to Northwestern I was also accepted to Temple, Bentley and DePaul’s MS in Marketingprograms as well.”

“Hi. I got admitted at Insead, as well as [Northwestern] Kellogg! =D So excited to share this news with you. … I thank you sincerely for all the invaluable help you provided with my essays. Kellogg would not have been possible at all with your input….. I hope you and your wife have an amazing Christmas and New Years. Once again, thank you for all your wonderful help! I am sure I would not have made it into Kellogg on my low GPA if it wasnt for your brilliant mentorship on the essays/application.”

“Hope all’s well. Just wanted to give you an update on the b school proccess. I got into UNC [Kenan-Flagler] this week so thats a big relief. I also have an interview at NYU next week so thats exciting too… Anyway, your input has been very helpful so far so I just wanted to thank you and keep you updated… [Later:] Paul: Just wanted to let you know that I got in to NYU [Stern]. 2 out of 3 is pretty good. Thanks for all of the great help-couldn’t have done it without you.”

“I wanted to let you know that I got admitted to Chicago [Booth] and Michigan [Ross] pending MIT [Sloan] and NYU [Stern]….Thank you for all your help. Your help definitely made the difference!”

“Hello, I wanted to give you an update that results came out. I have got admission offer from [Berkeley] Haas… Thanks,… Yes, I will attend Haas, that is my 1st choice anyway. “

“Hey, just wanted to shoot you a quick update – NYU [Stern] sent me an acceptance a few weeks ago. Thanks again for all your help,”

“I really appreciate your help! Before you, I worked with another consultant and was not so happy about his service. I am very glad that I decided to work with you instead of the previous consultant for the rest of my applications. I would love to recommend … you.” [Admitted at Cornell Johnson]

“That makes two of your clients [admitted to Wharton’s EMBA program]… Thank you and thanks for all of your help Paul. [In response to my email that another client had just called saying Wharton EMBA had admitted him]

“I did hear from UVA [Virginia Darden] – I got in.”

“Thank you very much! You were fantastic to work with and showed a lot of patience with me. Also, there were times when I had approaching deadlines for UCLA [Anderson] and you turned around the essay edits in very quick time. I couldn’t have done it without your help.” [Admitted at UCLA]

“Hey! I just found out today I got into [Northwestern] Kellogg….”

“Thank you for following up. I heard from LBS and have been selected for the interview stage…. I would have called up to personally thank you for editing my essays for LBS once I was back in the US. I appreciate your quick responses. Your inputs not only helped me with LBS application but also helped me prepare my INSEAD [later admitted] application after that. best regards”

“I got the written confirmation yesterday and my admission [to Chicago Booth] is official now. I not only gained admission but also improved my writing skills by working with you. What else I can say? You helped a lot to make this happen.”

LBS [London Business School] has informed me that I have been accepted. I am absolutely delighted. Thank you very much for all that you have done for me. Your input made all the difference. I am hoping for the best for the remaining places. [Later] Paul, I am in:) I am delighted to inform you that I have been accepted by Wharton. Before I say anything else, I would like to thank you for all the help you provided. Your help made all the difference. I will be happy to provide a positive feedback as your client if you would like me to. With my acceptance from LBS, I am currently in a very privileged position to be able to choose between several top schools. Regards,” [Later] Paul, I was informed that I have been admitted to Columbia. Paul, I can’t thank you enough for your help! I have a very tough decision to take now among Wharton, Columbia and LBS…. [Later] INSEAD: I am in:) I have been accepted to INSEADFontainebleau campus. I am very delighted. It is 4 out of 4:) Thank you very much for your help. Regards,”

“Hi, Great news- Accepted at [Michigan] Ross! Thank you so much for helping me through the process, editing my story to create better impact and advising me on schools I should apply to. Couldn’t have done it without you! … Thanks again, you are awesome! Best”

“Last night I just received the response from NYU [Stern] and it is an affirmative one!! At least now I know for sure that I will be occupied even more, starting late this summer. Again, many, many thanks for your help with the editing of the statement – it simply couldn’t have gotten to that beautiful final stage without your help. You DEFINITELY deserve a big chunk of the credit for the admission decision.”

“Thanks! [Admitify consultant] was an absolute delight to work with and incredibly valuable in my process…I’m thrilled to have this amazing opportunity [Duke full-time MBA] ahead of me.”

“Dear [Admitify consultant], I got the phone call from UCLA [Anderson] 7am this morning that I was admitted [with $15,000 fellowship]. I am truly thankful for all the help from you! Now I have to choose UCLA v.s. Yale [SOM]…. I still have not decided where to go, but I have payed tuition deposits for both universities to secure my seat. I will dedicate the next couple of months to speak with some more alumni, carefully check post-MBA job opportunities and, ultimately, take a decision. Paul, I would like to thank you for all your help in structuring my outlines … as they helped me create a strong set of base essays I was able to adapt to other universities’ applications…. I can really tell [you] do care about … client’s applications and do [your] best to address their concerns. I wish you the best of luck. Best,”

“Thank you. Got into LBS! [London Business School EMBA] ”

“I will be starting my Columbia EMBA in September. I am very excited.”

“ FYI – just got accepted into [MIT] Sloan R1.”

“Dear [Admitify consultant]: Thanks again for all your help. The numbers are in and the result was.
LBS [London Business School] accepted
INSEAD accepted
Wharton rejected
Columbia rejected
I have decided to attend LBS.”

“I am very pleased to let you know that I have been accepted to the INSEAD MBA program (the only school to which I applied) … I want to take this opportunity to thank Paul Bodine once more for his tremendous help and professionalism in helping me get through the tough essays. I am glad to have used your services and will recommend you highly to all my acquaintances who are planning an MBA in the near future. Thanks once more and best of luck for the future.“

“Yes! Thank you for your email…. In the end it was meant to be, I guess. I am submitting my deposit tomorrow to join the [Columbia Business School] class of 2015. I really appreciate all of your oversight in this process. Your service is first rate and I have nothing but nice things to say about [name of Paul Bodine Consulting / Admitify consultant] whose unique combination of business skills (i.e. understanding and performing under deadlines, effective communication style etc.) and writing prowess make him the ideal B-School editor. I would recommend the service to anyone who [needs] guidance and direction in the application process. Thank you for all of your help, I am certain that I would have not gotten the thumbs up from the admission’s team without the suport [sic] of Paul Bodine Consulting / Admitify. All the best,”

“Hi— Hope you’re doing well. I got admission to Duke’s FT MBA program. I’m planning to matriculate there…. Thanks in advance.”

“In at Michigan [Ross]! Can`t thank you enough…”

“Your editing services made may [sic] essays the best that they could be!” [Admitted at Kellogg (Northwestern) and U. Texas Austin]

“I was recently notified of my acceptance to UofM [Michigan Ross] for this upcoming fall. I greatly appreciated all the hard work you put forth on my essays. I took a look at my essays this weekend to compare the initial version with the finalized version. The input and guidance that you provided improved each essay beyond belief. I had an average GMAT score, GPA, and interview, so I really think that my essays were a deciding factor in my acceptance. Again, thanks for all the hard work and insight. I have some friends applying in the fall, so I will make sure to forward them your name.“

“[Admitify consultant] has been extremely helpful during my application process, and his guidance and insight gave me direction and clarity in writing the essay. His flexibility and timely responses, his patience and support, were more than I expected when I signed up for your services. Thank you once again for an outstanding job!” [Admitted at Columbia Business School]

“Hi, fyi i have got into haas berkeley. Thanx for suggesting improvements in my berkeley essay.. Regards,”

“From feedback on my essays to mock interview sessions over Skype, Paul was a vital guide who led me through the graduate school application process. Paul demonstrates an almost innate understanding of what schools want — something that can only be attained after years of successfully navigating the process. In large thanks to Paul, I will be joining a premier joint-MBA [Chicago Booth]/MA in Int’l Relations program this fall.”

“Hi I ended up joining MIT Sloan so have already started with them for this year. Thanks a lot for your help.”

“Hi, I never really got a chance to formally thank you for all your help. I started Chicago Booth last week and it is great. It would not have been possible without you. By the way, I also got an accept fromUCLA [Anderson]. We made a great team. If you ever need anything on my end, please feel free to contact me.”

“… I am happy going to [Dartmouth] Tuck. Thanks again for your help.”

“I will go for Columbia [Business School]. Many thanks for your advise and guidance. cheers,”

“Paul, no news from Harvard [Business School] yet. They said earliest to really expect anything is May after the 3rd round. … However, I sent basically the same letter to Wharton and Chicago [Booth] in late Feb. … I was accepted to both in March (with a $10k scholarship to Chicago). I think the letter really helped me inform them of my promotion and address the same weakness that was in all my apps. So, thank you!”

“Got into UCLA [Anderson] and Claremont. [Berkeley] Haas offered me admission last month, but it is a short notice; thus, I declined the offer.”

“Just wanted to tell you that I got into Chicago [Booth] early last week. Got a call from Don Martin and told him that I would accept the offer. As for U Michigan [Ross], it is a great school but I think that GSB is a much better fit for me. Thanks for all of your help in what seemed liked a never ending process.”

“Hi, I have always meant to respond to your email. … I got accepted to Wharton (the Exec MBA) program and am now attending classes. Thanks much for your help.”

“Hi Alex, I got the acceptance call from [Chicago] Booth today. So excited! Thanks for all your help in making this happen!!!”

“Hi Yes — success [admitted by Berkeley Haas EWMBA]. Appreciate all your feedback!”

“Hi, Just a few lines to tell you that I have been admitted to Kellogg-HKUST EMBA program. Thanks a lot for your help. It has been incredibly helpful. Best,”

“Hi, Glad to hear you [sic]. I plan to inform you about my results. Thanks to your great help, I am accepted to LBS [London Business School], [Rochester] Simons [sic] and IESE [Business School]. I got partial scholarship from Simon…. Anyway, I decide to go to IESE. Because LBS can not confirm my place in this year yet, although they give me a secured place in 2001. I learned from my experiences that an good essay is a very critical step in the application process. And your help definitely paved my road towards to these leading business schools. I am heading to Barcelona next week…. Thank you and Best Regards.”

“There is no doubt in my mind that Paul’s editing and coaching skills were critical to securing my place at the INSEAD MBA program of July 20XX. Having made my acquaintance with Paul Bodine by chance; a spur of the moment airport purchase of “Great Application Essays for Business School” (an excellent guide to getting started), I decided to engage him for further advice. You have family, friends, colleagues and superiors to help you get in the school of your choice; in addition what you need is someone who knows you as well as the admittance officer initially: not at all. I made use of Paul’s experience and skills in idea selection and editing (the essays) and coaching (interview practice). Across all these services the difference that Paul makes to your performance stems from his natural inclination to empathize with the admittance officer who will be reading your application, and his ability to help you communicate the desired content succinctly. Having taken a slightly risky and last-minute approach to my MBA application (applying only to one school and entering my application only in its fourth and final admittance round), I am grateful to my younger self for investing the time and money in Paul’s exceptionally effective services. I am grateful to Paul for being both outstanding and amiable in his profession.”

“Hi, I got admitted into CBS [Columbia Business School] this week, really happy and thankful for your great help!… I am sure you get this a lot that ‘what I can do without you!’… Thank you very much for all the help… Please let me know how to share my thank you note on your webpage!”

“I was accepted at INSEAD. Regards,”

“Hello, … I wanted to let you know that I’ve accepted my offer from MIT Sloan and will be attending this year. I’ve been accepted into the Leaders for Global Operations (LGO) program at Sloan, so am getting both my Masters in Science from the engineering school and MBA from Sloan in the next 2 years. It’s very exciting and I can’t wait to move to Boston! Thanks for all your help through the essay editing and coaching during the application process.”

“great news! I got into [UCLA] Anderson today. I’m ecstatic about this but it does mean I have a decision to make come Friday. I need to tell Texas [McCombs] whether I will attend or not (and plunk down my deposit)…. [Later] Got off the WL at [UC Berkeley] Haas at long last…going to head there.”

“Sorry for not updating you earlier. I got through [Northwestern] Kellogg ..and thats the school I will be attending.. Thank You for all your help.”

“Hi, Yes, I have wonderful news! I applied early to Yale [SOM], and I was accepted. Thanks again for all your help!”

Chicago [Booth] it is. Thanks”

“We did it! Without your help and guidance I would not have had the proper perspective when approaching my applications. You provided me with the right lens that enabled me to see what I needed to address in my application. You helped address things unique to myself that I may have overlooked if I worked alone. I got accepted to 7 out of the 9 schools I applied to! And I got into one of my top choices! My main goal was to get into Columbia or NYU and I got into NYU [Stern]!!!!
Emory University – Accepted & Full Scholarship (100%)
Carnegie Mellon Tepper – Accepted & $10,000 per year
Georgetown University – Accepted & $40,000
Cornell Johnson – Accepted & TBA on $
NYU Stern – Accepted & TBA on $
Duke Fuqua – Accepted & TBA on $
UVA Darden – Accepted
Columbia – Interview & Denied
Yale – Denied
I still cant believe the good news! Somehow I got into these schools without any prestigious firm or school on my resume AND had a 3.0 GPA. Unless you oppose, I plan on writing a great debrief/promotion of your services on gmatclub.com. Thank you so much,”

“Hi, Great news, I GOT ACCEPTED!!!!! [by Oxford Said] I’m super thrilled!!!! Thank you so much for all your help!!! I can’t express how much you’ve been really helpful and patient with my essays and interview practices. I’ll definitely be recommending you to my friends applying for MBA … [Later:] Another great news, I got accepted at Cambridge [Judge]!!! But wait..there is more..I also got a 5000 scholarship!! Thanks so much as always :)”

“Got into Tepper CMU and UNC Kenan Flagler. Waitlisted in NYU, Haas, Tuck and McCombs. I decided for Tepper CMU full scholarship via Consortium. Thx for all your advice. It was helpful. Best…”

“Hi, I hope you are well! Sorry I couldn’t get back to you earlier. I was swamped with work related to my recent start-up…. I’m glad to say that I have been accepted by Oxford [Said]! … Best Regards,”… [Later] Hi Paul, I hope this email finds you well!! I’ve got admits to the following: 1) UCLA [Anderson] – NO $ 2) SAID – NO $ 3) [Washington U.] OLIN – $$ … Thanks,”

“Wanted to update you on my status with schools. I’m 1 for 4. Got dinged by Harvard, Stanford, Wharton but got into Columbia [Business School]…. Thank you for all your help. :)”

“Hi, Am at LBS [London Business School and later INSEAD]. All is well. Thank you so much. Best wishes,”

“Thanks for the best wishes! I’m really looking forward to getting started. During the [NYU Stern] pre-view weekend, a few people were shocked when they found out my age (young), GMAT (nothing special [640]), and undergrad ([School name] what?). We must have done something right :-). Thanks,”

“Thank you … for following up… generally inputs from my reviewer, Paul Bodine, has been extremly [sic] helpful while writing my INSEAD application… I have been selected for 2 rounds of interviews and have already completed one [eventually admitted by INSEAD] … Thank you … I appreciate it.”

“Hi, Sharing good news – I received a call from [UC Berkeley] Haas yesterday – I got in! … Thanks a lot for your help! Best”

“Thank you very much. It was great using [Paul’s] services. My goal was to get in to two schools out of 5, and it happened with [your] company’s help.” [Admitted by Chicago Booth and Michigan Ross]

“Hi:… I am delighted to share the news that [Northwestern] Kellogg has admitted me into their Executive MBA program. I would like to thank you for your excellent guidance and assistance with drafting my essays. I am sure I wouldnt have had the right focus or approach in my essays, should it not have been for your guidance. Thanks a ton.”

“Hi! Apologies for not coming back to you sooner. I was accepted to [Chicago] Booth with a 60K scholarship, accepted to Wharton, and waitlisted at MIT (I declined the waitlist).”… [Interview client]

“Got accepted at Duke [EMBA]!!!!! … [Later:] I got into Kellogg [EMBA]!!! … Hi! All is well. I decided to go with Kellogg. Although, when I told Duke about my dilemma, they were great and actually named me the Forté Scholar (which came with a small scholarship), which from my understanding, is unusual for an emba student. Thank you so much for your assistance- with not only my essays but the resume, and with assisting the recommendations. You gave insight that I would not have otherwise known!! Best,”

“Thanks! … Wanted to share some good news with you: I just got a call from a Columbia admissions officer who said that I am admitted!”

“Dear [Admitify consultant], Am really excite to let you know that I got into [Dartmouth] Tuck. I have another couple WLs but I am not thinking about them. I must thank you for your help and advice through emails and your book. Thanks,”

“Hi, Thanks for reaching out!… Your feedback was immensely helpful – thank you very much for that. I ended up getting into MIT Sloan, Columbia and Wharton and decided to attend Wharton… Thanks again, and I hope to stay in touch!”

“Hi! I’m really sorry for the late reply. Brief results of my application campaign:
– In: Stanford, Wharton, INSEAD
Finally, I’ll go to Palo Alto in September Thank you again for your help with the application! I believe that it was your advice that allowed me to bring my HWS applications to such a competitive level. I would be happy to provide any kind of testimonials. Sincerely,”

“I did [get an offer from Wharton]! Accepted with a Kaiser Fellowship (8k). Got a call from June about 30 min ago…”

“Hi, Congratulations on your book offer! … Good luck with writing your book. cheers,” [Client admitted toWharton]

“good news! Just got the admissions offer phone call from CBS [Columbia Business School]! Amanda Carlson told me that the adcom loved reading my application and was unanimous in their decision. Great feeling. Thank you so much for your help; your pointers and edits gave me the confidence and b-school savvy I needed to pull together a top-notch application. Invaluable service! Thanks again! I’ll be recommending you to everyone I know.” … [LinkedIn Testimonial:] I hired Paul after reading his book (Great Applications for Business School) in spring 2012. I was confident in my MBA admissions story and essays, but I wanted an expert’s pair of eyes to ensure I didn’t make any rookie mistakes. Paul’s advice helped me highlight the true strengths of my resume and essays and allowed me to craft a better product. I was successfully accepted to Columbia Business School in the Early Decision round of 2012.”

“I just got word from [University of Virginia] Darden that I had been offered deferred admission to the class entering in the fall of 20XX and I have accepted that. Thanks”

“Hi: I have decided going to University of Michigan Business School this year…. Thanks a lot.”

“I certainly remember you. You helped me tremendously [admitted by Kellogg]. Congratulations, on the book offer!… I look forward to reading the revised essay and seeing your book in print!”

“Dear [Admitify consultant], I want to “Thank You” for your guidance and advice leading to my acceptance into the Kellogg School of Mgt. Executive MBA Program – I was accepted today and am very excited to start the next chapter in my career. I look forward to staying in touch and if I can be of any help in your work, please let me know….Thanks again!!! All the best,”

“Hi, I just heard from [client name] that he’s been accepted at LBS [London Business School] and wanted to let you know in case he hasn’t emailed you with the news. Thanks again for doing the mock interview with him!”

“Thanks! I really appreciate the help from Paul! Before Paul, I worked with another consultant and was not so happy about his service. And I am very glad that I decided to work with Paul instead of the previous consultant for the rest of my applications.” [Admitted by Cornell Johnson]

“THANK YOU SO MUCH! i got accepted at HARVARDDD [School of Public Health] gosh i feel like screaming aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa so happyyyyyyyy”

“Hi, Wanted to share with you the news that I have been admitted to INSEAD and couldn’t be more excited! Very grateful for your help in this process, I couldn’t have done it without you. … Many thanks again,”

“I hope this email finds you well. Last week I received some great news from the UK: I was accepted forLBS [London Business School] MBA. I’d like to thank you once more for the support provided on my Essays, the improvements you’ve added to the overall quality of them are unquestionable. I wish you all the best on your future plans. Best regards,”

“Hi, Great news! I got accepted to both LMU [Loyola Marymount U.] and USC [Marshall]. As soon as I get their admissions packages, I will submit my acceptance to USC. Thank you for all your help on my essays. I couldn’t have done it without your help!”

“Hi, Congratulations on landing the book contract. I am getting ready to Wharton and will be going to Philly in the first week of August. Best Regards,”

“Dear [Admitify Consultant], A very Good Morning!! I feel really excited to inform you that I got an admit from Georgetown [McDonough]. Certainly, and without an iota of doubt, it has been possible only with your guidance. A heartfelt thanks!! Thank you so much once again!!!”

“Hello, Thank you for the follow up, I’ve been admitted at University of Texas at Austin [McCombs]and University of Michigan at Ann Arbor [Ross]. I will most likely head to Ann Arbor.”

“Hi, I wanted to share with you that I’ve been offered admittance to Columbia [Business School]. In addition to admittance they have selected me as the recipient of the David Gill fellowship which covers full tuition. So, the best result possible! I can’t really believe it. Thanks very much for your help! Thanks,”

“I got accepted in [Cornell] Johnson Business School after being on wait list for 2 months. Thanks a lot for your help during my admission and wait list process. I could not have done this without you. I had many grey areas in my application (age, background and demographic profile). But I believe the key questions you asked me made my work experience and goals sellable to admissions committee. Your insight and experience definitely played a huge role in making my application impressive.“

“Hello, Sorry for not getting back to you earlier, I was away on my internship…. I truly feel that the essays [for Wharton] were my stories and the final product was entirely my choice…. My wife might apply to bschool next fall or the fall after that…. Thanks,” [Admitted by Wharton]

“Hi, I’ve received all my application results. I got into HEC Paris [MSc. International Business] andJohns Hopkins [SAIS], and will go with Johns Hopkins this fall. Thank you so much for your timely and efficient help!… Thank you very much. Best,”

“Great news! I was accepted to [a top 10 B-School]! It was pretty shocking to get off the waitlist that early, but I’m sure the extra letter of rec and the [wait-list] letter you helped me edit had something to do with it. Again, thanks very much for your help.”

“I wanted to let you know I was admitted to Michigan [Ross] – incredibly psyched and convinced ur help got me across the line. … decision is pretty much final, like UNC [Kenan-Flagler], but michigan is much higher ranked. … Appreciate all ur help…. u will hopefully get plenty of referrals from me going forward!! Best,”

“Hey, I did and got in [UCLA Anderson]! Which is great. Thanks for all your help….Anyway, hope you have a merry Christmas.”

“In at [UCLA] Anderson…”

“Thanks for your help on the waitlist letter. I decided not to go with your letter of rec service. I just got off the Cornell [Johnson] waitlist yesterday and I obviously no longer need to send them a letter of rec. thanks again for your help.”

“Yes!!! Just got the verbal [offer of admission from Kellogg FT MBA]…. Appreciate your help in that ultra tight timeline.”

“Hey. I was admitted [by Virginia Darden] June 8th.”

“Hi, I’ve been accepted at Oxford [Said] in Round 3 (just got the email today). Thanks,”

“I will be attending Carnegie Mellon’s [CMU Tepper] FlexMode program this September. I believe my acceptance had a lot to do with the help I got from Paul.”

“Hi, I had applied to HBS, Stanford and part-time Haas. While rejected by the first two, I did secure admission to [UC Berkeley] Haas. Regards”

“got into Duke [Fuqua].”

“There is no way in a million years that I could have injected the brilliance that you infused in my essays.” [Admitted at CMU Tepper]

“An admit from LBS [London Business School]…. I’d be happy to attend LBS…. [Later] Hi Paul, Just wanted to let you know that I’ve been offered a seat at INSEAD. Now I have a very difficult decision to make between LBS and INSEAD …”

“Hi: I got the offer from Duke Fuqua. Just let you know. And, thank you very much for helping me. Really thanks!~ … Thanks again! Best Regards”

Hello! Sorry it took so long for me to get back to you…. I think it went well! She only asked me 3 questions, don’t know if that’s a good think or a bad thing…, but I received the good news [fromColumbia EMBA] on thrusday [sic]! Thank you for everything…. Thank you very much!”

“I got accepted at DUKE Hey! Well I have good news!!! They just called me Thanks” [to Admitify consultant; Later:] … Hey! I have great news!
I got accepted at Kellogg :):) Thanks for everything”

“Got accepted at Duke [EMBA]!!!!! … [Later] I got into Kellogg [EMBA]!!! … [Later] Hi! All is well. I decided to go with Kellogg. Although, when I told Duke about my dilemma, they were great and actually named me the Forté Scholar (which came with a small scholarship), which from my understanding, is unusual for an emba student. Thank you so much for your assistance- with not only my essays but the resume, and with assisting the recommendations. You gave insight that I would not have otherwise known!! Best,”

“Hi, Just to let you know that I was called in for an interview at UT [Texas] Austin (Evening MBA program) last week, and received my admit letter today ! Thanks a lot for your help.”

“Hi, Guess what? I know you’ve already noticed the subject line! I’m in @ [Univ. of Texas] Austin! Thank you very much man! Wouldn’t have been possible without your help and support. They will send the details on coming weeks. Such a relief!… [later] I did! Even got a call from them :). I was accepted [UCLA Anderson]!!! … Thank you so much for your support.”

“Paul, Firstly – my apologies for taking so long to reply! With regards to Kellogg and Booth – admitted to both! I’m sure this was in no small part due to your advice and preparation assistance, so I really appreciate all of your help! Thanks again,”

“Hi, I got admitted to G’town [Georgetown McDonough] with $10,000/year grants, and USC [Marshall] (no grant information available right now)… My husband is on his way of application for enrollment of 20XX. He also hopes to work with you. Best,”

“Hello, It has been a crazy week that started with very good news. I have been accepted to [Carnegie Mellon] Tepper and today I received a call from a Consortium rep — I have been offered a fellowship. I’m taking it all in stride. There is no way in a million years that I could have injected the brilliance that you helped me infuse in my essays. Please let me know where to submit my compliments. Thank you!!!”

“Hi, Thanks so much for alley our help. I applied to Cornell [EMBA] and [NYU] stern [EMBA] and got a call from both the colleges.
Since you are so knowledgable about this, what would you advice my choice should be. I will wait to hear back from you and once again thanks. If you want my feedback in your website, I wil be more than happy to do so.”

“Thanks for your help !!! I got in off the waitlist, yesterday and will be attending [University of North Carolina] Kenan-Flagler this fall. It feels awesome !!! … Once again thanks for your help, I couldn’t have done it without you.”

“Great news! I actually just got back from a 2 week trip to Asia and right before I left I was accepted toUCLA [Anderson]! It was pretty shocking to get off the waitlist that early, but I’m sure the extra letter of rec and the letter you helped me edit had something to do with it. Again, thanks very much for your help. It looks like I’m going to be a bruin again in the fall.”

“Hi, I got admitted at Yale [SOM]! Thanks a lot for your help…. [Later] I have some more good news! I have been offered admission by [Michigan] Ross School of Business! I appreciate your support. Thanks and Regards,”

“Hi, Unfortunately, I was dinged by Stanford today … but thanks again for your efforts. I hope to get offUCLA [Anderson]‘s waitlist sometime this summer [He did]”

“I have been accepted to the NYU [New York University]/LSE [London School of Economics]/HEC eMBA program. I start in September. Your assistance was very useful. Thanks.”

“I received my acceptance from USC [Marshall] yesterday… [Later:] I am writing … to inform [you] about my acceptance to Rice [Jones]. Rice also offered me a small scholarship…. Let me know what you think.”

“Dear [Admitify consultant], I am happy to let you know that I have received an admit from Oxford [Said]. I wanted to thank you for your help especially with the Oxford second essay and bringing out the best in what was seemingly a difficult question. Having gone though the process with Oxford and other schools, I not only learnt how to present myself better but also how to write good essays…. Thanks again.”

“I have received a conditional offer [from London Business School Sloan Masters in Leadership and Strategy]!! The condition is submission of a second reference. Thankyou very much for your services. Kind Regards,”

“Thanks for checking in. Wharton had me on the wait list and time has run out for that to materialize. In the meantime, I had already accepted [NYU] Stern.”

“I got into [UC Berkeley] Haas [MFE] (from the waitlist), UCLA [Anderson], & Claremont.”

“Dear Darren [Joe,Paul Bodine Consulting / Admitify consultant]: Just got an email from ESMT [European School of Management and Technology] with 3000 Euro scholarship! Very very very excited!! Again, your help is significant especially in the interview phase. I would not secure this offer without your insightful instructions ! I sincerely appreciate it! […] I can’t wait to share this good news with you that I have been admitted in to ESADE MIM+CEMS. Again, it’s largely due to your kind help and thorough due diligence. I appreciate it a lot!”

“Hi, I hope you are doing well. I just wanted to send an update on my school acceptances. So far I have been admitted to 4/5 programs I applied to: NYU Wagner (MPA), UW [Washington] Evans (MPA), UW [Washington] Foster (MBA), and Columbia (MPA-DP). I had my interview at NYU Stern last week and am expecting to hear back in the next couple of weeks. Thanks so much for all of your help with the application process!! Best,”

“ I just got the call from Randall, I’m in for the [Cornell Johnson] class of 20XX with a 20K scholarship. Need to sort out the logistics now. You’ve been a great help and I only wish I worked with you about 2 years ago when I started this tiresome journey.”

“Dear [Admitify consultant], Thank you for writing an email! Anyway, I have to share some good news with you! I just got a message from UCLA [Anderson] saying I got in! Thank god it wasn’t too long on the waitlist!! … Anyway, it all worked out in the end! And I feel that some part is thanks to your support!” [Also admitted by HKUST:] “Paul broke down the daunting essay question into comprehensible sections and he made it so much easier for me to start the writing process. Without his help, I wouldn’t have managed to write those winning essays into HKUST! – Thanks Paul!”

“Paul does great work. I don’t think I could have gotten through the business school application process without him.” [Admitted at UNC Kenan-Flagler]

“Hi, I apologize for the late reply… Anyway, the interview went really well. The advice that you gave me contributed to a very successful interview…The following day I received an acceptance email [from SMU Cox EMBA] with a condition to update my goals that we already discussed during the interview. I appreciate you for helping me prepare for the interview on such a short notice. Best regards,”

“I’ve received my first letter of acceptance! IESE in Barcelona. This is pretty much my first choice so I am supper stoked….Thanks for your help!”

“Hey– Yes I did and I am currently deciding between IESE and IMD! Thanks once again for checking and I will make sure to refer you to friends who are in the application process. Thanks”

“Hi: Thank you for your interest… I’ve got acceptance in the [IE Business School] Global MBA +Program! … Kind regards,”

“Guess what? My MBA application game is finally over. Yesterday, I got off the wait-list and got admitted to the Anderson School at UCLA. I am very excited to join the 200X entering class this fall. I appreciate your assistance and patience during my application process. It has been one of the most memorable experiences in my life in both good and bad ways. One thing for sure is that without your professional service, I have never gone this process through. Now, I realize that the money I’ve spent for the service is worth investing to enhance my prospect to obtain admission from the most prestigious schools. Once again, thank you for everything you have done for me.”

“Hello, I just wanted to let you know that I was admitted to the four programs I applied to. Now it is the time to decide which one to go for. I applied to Cambridge Judge, Imperial, IE and Bocconi. I already rejected Bocconi. So now is the time to decide. I want to truly thank you for your assistance and time. Best regards”

“Hi,… Just received a call from Ivey [Western Ontario] by the way, I got accepted with a scholarship of $20,000! Didn’t expect that. [Later] Hi Paul, Yes I got in [to Babson]! Best,”

“Hi, … I am accepted by the USC [Marshall] evening program. Thanks.”

“Paul, I have got an accept from Krannert (Purdue) and waitlists from USC- Marshall and Kenan-Flagler. Still waiting from the rest (Was invited for an interview with Cornell). [Later: Accepted by Indiana Kelley]”

“I am in at UMBS [Michigan Ross], waitlisted by Wharton and dinged by Harvard and Kellogg. Thanks for your help.”

“Thanks for your email as well as your help and support through the application process. I received a promotion at my current job and have decided to stay here for now. Status update on my schools below…
Harvard: Declined no interview
Wharton: Declined after waitlist
Columbia [Business School]: Accepted
I hope you don’t mind if I recommend friends and colleagues to you in the future.”

“Hope all is well with you too. Got into [Michigan] Ross and [UCLA] Anderson.”

“Good Morning, I wanted to share the good news that I got into the Harvard PLD [Program for Leadership Development] program and will start in December. Thank you again for your incredibly valuable feedback!”

“Hi, Got admit from [Virginia] Darden I need to decide between Duke [Fuqua] and Darden and am not sure which one is better. Will need to weigh both schools again Thanks,”

“Hey, Yes I started the Columbia [Business School] jterm program this year. All the best,”

“Congratulations on this contract [Great Applications for Business School] and thank you for contacting me. It sounds exciting and is a fitting recognition of your deep understanding of the business school admissions process. I support you and wish you well,… Thank you again and best wishes.” [Admitted byWharton]

“Hi, I applied five schools this year, Harvard [Business School], [Northwestern] Kellogg, UCLA [Anderson],Berkeley [Haas] and Yale [SOM]. Currently I get offers from UCLA and Berkeley, waitlisted on Yale and dinged by Harvard and Kellogg. I may go to Berkeley, I think Thanks for all of your help!”

“​Hi, I got accepted by JHU [Johns Hopkins MS in Enterprise Risk Management]! They also gave me $20,000 scholarship…. Thank you Paul. Without your help, I can’t be so lucky to get accepted by JHU. Best, … [later] Good News from Georgia State Hi Paul, I was accepted by Georgia State!! [master’s in mathematical risk management]”

“Dear [Admitify consultant], I’m very glad to tell you that I got admitted to HBX CORe. The online study started two weeks ago and I’m enjoying the experience tremendously.”

“Hey, The interview was OK. Not my best but definitely not my worst… Regardless, I received a call from the admissions director yesterday, ACCEPTED [by Chicago Booth EMBA]! It all happened so fast … I scheduled a class visit and met a bunch of current Booth EMBA students. I had a really good feeling there… Wanted to share the good news with you.”

“Dear [Admitify consultant], Yes, I did. I am happy to say that I got the offer to join [Dartmouth] Tuckclass of ’18! I also got invitation for interview from LBS [London Business School] as well. Thank you for your support in essay and application writing. Have a great weekend!… [Later] I wanted to let you know that I also got an offer from London Business School! Now I am in the midst of making a decision in selecting the school (between Tuck and LBS). Thank you for your support!”

“Hi Paul, Happy to tell you that I just got accepted into the [HBS Harvard] 2+2 program!!! Thanks for all your help and advice along the way! Cheers,”

“Hello, Thanks for your assistance with my application essays. I just wanted to give you an update on the status of my MBA applications…. Duke – Fuqua (Admitted) …. So, about three weeks ago the Assistant Director of Admissions at [University of Virginia] Darden … called to offer me a spot in Darden’s new Global Executive Program. However, I … have decided to attend The Fuqua School of Business at Duke University [full-time MBA]. Thank you for all of your help Paul. You really helped me craft excellent essays.”

“Hi, Hope you are well. The last few months have been a rollercoaster, so I apologize for the late reply. Just wanted to let you know that I’ve been admitted to UCLA Anderson (Consortium fellowship),Kellogg and Yale. Those were the only schools I applied to in Round 2, and feel very fortunate that I was admitted to all three. I’m beyond excited to hear back and couldn’t believe it. Had no idea where any of my efforts were going to go… I wanted to thank you for the time we worked together and for getting me on the right track and mindset for business school applications. Thank you again,”

“Hi, Hope you are doing well. I got the [Duke] Fuqua admit and wanted to share that news with you. Thank you so much for all your help…it was invaluable and gave me a lot of peace of mind. Please don’t hesitate to get in-touch with me if you think I can be of some help to you in the future. Thanks again,”

“Pretty good, I got a waitlist in Tuck, and I got accepted in Anderson UCLA and in Darden UVA, I got a 50% scholarship in Darden so Im here crunching numbers. Thank you for your help!!”

“Thankfully, I was accepted to UNC-Chapel Hill [Kenan-Flagler]… I want to really thank you for the work you did in helping me craft my stories into strong essays and preparing me for the interviews. Without your help I think my odds would have been slim to none at each of the schools I targeted…. Thanks again for your advice and support in the entire process.”

“MIT – rejection w/o interview. I’ll be attending Cornell [Johnson] this fall. It’s the only other school I applied to.”

“I got accepted to the Kellogg-HKUST EMBA 2010 program. It was ranked no.1 globally by Financial Times. Thank you for your help and support.”

“Thanks for the follow up.. I sent my app to [Chicago] booth [EMBA} and got accepted for 2013 …. Thanks for your time”

“Hi! The interview didn’t go as well as I thought it should have, but I ended up being accepted [atOxford Said Executive MBA]! It still doesn’t feel real. I was going to write you this week and inform you of the recent good news. There’s one more thing to be grateful for this Thanksgiving! Thank you so much again for all of your help! Best Regards,”

“Hi, I have good news from [Chicago] Booth [EMBA] today ! Attached is the offer letter from the school. The class will start on 14 June in Chicago campus, then London and Hong Kong for 21 months, consisting of 3 weeks in Chicago, 1 week in London and 16 weeks in Hong Kong. I have to start applying for visas immediately. Your work did help a lot in strengthening my application, enabling me to complete all the application within only one month of my busy schedule. I am really impressed with your professionalism and added value that you bring to my application. Thanks again Paul and I wish you all the best. Best regards,”

“Hey, same to you. Funny, I was just going to let you know that I got into UNC [Kenan-Flagler]yesterday…. thanks for checking in”

“Hi, I … got accepted into LSE [London School of Economics MiM] a few months ago; just thought I would let you know. Best,”

“Hi- Sorry for the delay. Waitlist at Gtown, admitted to UVA [Darden] and Scholarship to Duke [Fuqua]. Most likely going to UVA, love the culture and student body! Thanks,”

“[Name] called on Friday to let me know that he was accepted into all three of the part-time [MBA] programs he applied to: Michigan [Ross], Michigan State [Broad], and U. of Chicago [Booth]. He had a 610 GMAT.”

“I was notified by HEC [Paris] that I have been admitted their MBA program. I want to thank you for all your help. Thank you Paul! It was a good experience working with you guys. I will greatly recommend your services to future aspirants. Regards,”

“Hi: I’m in at Georgetown [McDonough], I can’t believe it!… But not only did I get admitted, I have also been offered a Merit Scholarship worth $10,000/year! This is an even bigger surprise! I certainly did not expect any sort of financial aid, especially with a GMAT score of 650. Paul, I can’t thank you enough. This has been one heck of a roller coaster ride and its great to be able to keep in correspondence. Best Regards,”

“I joined University of Rochester [Simon] last August. I am into my second semester and trying to survive the brutal workload, cold weather and pace of the program…. Hope things are moving along fine with you.”

“Hi Paul, I just received my acceptance letter for [John Hopkins] SAIS [School of Advanced International Studies], and want to thank you for your patience, expertise, and assistance. I know I would not have got accepted without it!”

“Hi, I got into [Michigan] Ross! I just wanted to let you know your book was extremely helpful….I read your book (Great Applications for Business School) and if helped me quite a bit with guiding recommenders and writing my update for Ross. So, thank you for writing such a great book.”

“Hello, I hope all is well for you too. I’d ultimately been admitted to NUS [National University of Singapore] and USC [Marshall], the results which could not be achieved without your help – Thank you very much. For those Koreans who seek consulting and editing toward MBA, I’ll definitely recommend you.”

“Hey, Lots of news. I … was accepted to UCLA Anderson (those admissions geniuses)!!… I have at least one referral that I am going to throw your way, students applying for next year. Thanks!!… Thanks for all of your help this year. You’ve helped me change my life and I’m so lucky I bought your book last march.”

“Got accepted at Duke [Weekend EMBA]!!!!! … Thanks Paul – I have to say that it was a true pleasure working with you. … Your turn-around time was amazing and your edits allowed my thoughts and ideas to be well articulated…. [Later] I got into Kellogg [EMBA]!!! Thanks for your help!”

“I hope this note finds you well. I’ve been meaning to write you back, but am glad I held off. I was just recently accepted off the wait-list at Georgetown [McDonough], and will be attending in the fall! I’m thrilled with the outcome. While I would not recommend to anyone the approach I took to applying to Business School, the fact it worked out in the end is fantastic! I am convinced your help throughout the process played a huge roll in my being accepted, and I can’t thank you enough!”

“Hey, How are you? I got accepted at the DC weekend program [at Maryland Smith]. I wanted to thank you for all your help with my essays. It was a real pleasure working with you and I would definitely recommend your services to others. Thanks again,”

“Made it to the no. 1 [interview invitation by London Business School]. Thanks a lottttt Pray for me for the interview.. plz [Also admitted to HEC Paris and Babson two-year MBA]”

“Hi, Hope all is well with you. I got accepted to UBC [British Columbia Sauder] MBA already…. Thank you very much for your support with the application. Regards,”

“Paul! I have got news! I got accepted to Cranfield with £ 8000 Scholarship! Paul, words are unable to express my gratitude to you for your help! THANK YOU with all my HEART!!!”

“Thanks! I loved using the service and Paul Bodine was fabulous. I was accepted at the Carlson School of Management’s Executive MBA program at the University of Minnesota…. Thanks again for all your help, it really made a difference.”

“Paul, Great news! Just received notification that I have been accepted [INSEAD Global Executive MBA]. Thank you very much for guiding me thru the process. Couldn’t have done it without your help on the essays and the assessment preparation. Look forward to our discussion on Friday. Best Regards,”

“[CONGRATULATIONS! All your hard work finally paid off. :-)] Yes, thanks for your help. Thanks,” [Admitted by UC Berkeley Haas EWMBA]”

“Hi, I am joining the Olin Business School at Washington University in St. Louis…. Thanks for very much!! Without your help, I couldn’t even have thought of applying this year….Yourself and your books has contributed immensely to my application process. Thanks again!! I feel lucky to have had the opportunity to work with you( the author of “Great Applications for Business School” – that book is truely a gem in this application process. Thanks for all your help!! Regards,”

“Hi How have you been? … By the way, just received my admit decision from Maryland. Pretty thrilled abt it…. Anyway, here is my application outcome so far:
Vandy [Vanderbilt Owen]: Admit
Iowa [Tippie]: Admit
Maryland [Smith]: Admit…
Ok, that’s all from me now.”

“Hi … By the way I have been accepted to the EMBA at BU [Boston University] thanks for all your help.”

“Hi, Sorry for the lack of updates. Hope you are doing well. It seems a year has passed since I first contacted you for the initial consultation! MIT reached out and asked if I’d like to be considered for theirMaster’s in Supply Chain Management. I did some research on the program, curriculum and job placements, and decided to go for it. Long story short, I was accepted…. Thanks for your help this past year. It was a tough to balance the applications with the constant business trips, but working with you made things much easier… I’m excited to see how things go. Thank you again, and hope to keep in touch. Best regards,”

“Hey, Hope all is well. I’ve actually decided to pursue an MBA at the Rotman School of Managementin Toronto. I’m excited for the next step in my career and looking forward to school in September. Thanks,”

“Hi, All is good! I begin school next week [Cornell-Queens Executive MBA]! I am very excited. Thanks for your message and support!”

“Hi I wanted to update you on Michigan and Oxford [Said] … U Mich- wait list Oxford – offered a seat. thanks”

“Hi, I applied to two part-time programs at USC and UCLA. I was waitlisted and then rejected at UCLA and I am still on the wait list at USC [Marshall, later admitted]. I’ve spoken with the admissions officers and they indicate that my poor GPA (2.41) is the weak point in my applications (GMAT 670, great recommendations, solid work experience, etc.). I’ll let you … know what happens, next. Thanks,”

“Wanted to take the time to thank you for your help with my admissions process. I was accepted to [Washington U.] Olin Business School this morning…. I wanted to thank you again for all of your help and you can now add Olin to your list of admitted students! I won’t need the 40 minutes, and you can either keep them or donate them to another prospective student as you see fit. Respectfully,”

“Hi I wanted to update you on Michigan and Oxford [Said] … U Mich- wait list Oxford – offered a seat. thanks”

“Thanks for the follow up.. I sent my app to [Chicago] booth and got accepted for 2013 … Thanks for your time …”

“Hi, … [Dartmouth] Tuck– admitted [Virginia] Darden– admitted with 50% tuition waiver ISB [Indian School of Business] – admitted I also got admitted to the IIMs… many thanks for helping me with the applications!”

“Thanks for your note! I am fine at the moment… Again, thanks for your advice. [admitted by INSEAD].”

“Dear [Admitify consultant], It’s done! I’ve sent my review with highest rating several months ago. Also i’ve received great news from UCLA [Anderson] and [Berkeley] Haas – they both want me in! Thank you again for the insights of your book! I wish you all the best. Kind regards,”

“Hi, Yes,… I have an offer from INSEAD…., thank you very much for all your help so far. It’s been a great journey.”

“Hey, I just wanted to drop you a quick line to say that I received my acceptance call from Georgetown [McDonough] yesterday. I can’t thank you enough for your guidance and suggestions for my essays. I’ve always been a lengthy writer (as you could probably tell) and your revisions helped me to say everything I wanted to within the constraints. Thanks again, couldn’t have done it without your help! best,”

“Hi, I was about to email you…. I got into Ivey School of Business [Western Ontario] in Canada with 40% scholarship…. I want to let you know that I am happy with the services that I received from you as a client and it was a pleasure working with you. Good luck with everything ! Regards,”

“Thank you for your service [admitted by Duke Fuqua]. I will recommend your consultation whenever possible. Best wishes,”

“Thanks for your message, Paul! In a quick decision in Round 2, I had decided to apply to [Duke] Fuqua, and as it turns out, I have been admitted with some scholarship… Thanks,”

“[Client name] was accepted at [Chicago] Booth, waitlisted at Wharton,… [Later] He got in [toWharton] a couple weeks ago and is still deciding between Booth and Wharton.
Nice problem to have. Talk soon, Paul.”

“Hey Paul, I got through Kellogg (1Y) and INSEAD. Have to think now where to go. Thanks for all your help during the process.”

“Hello, Wanted to let you know that I’ve been admitted to UT Austin [McCombs], and I’ll be accepting my place in the class of 2018! Thank you for all of your help!”

“I eventually got accepted to G town [Georgetown EMBA] Thank you for your all help If you have any question, please let me know sincerely,”

“Hi – Some good news. Earlier today, I was notified of my acceptance into Lancaster’s [University] MBA program. Thanks to you for your help with the Lancaster admit….It has truly been a great experience working with you so far and learning a ton of things in the process. Thanks again!”

“Thank you so much! After I visited Wake Forest [Schools of Business], I knew it was the school for me. I couldn’t have been any happier when they told me I was in with a full-tuition scholarship plus stipend. Paul definitely helped me submit the best application possible. I couldn’t have managed all of this without him. Thanks again!”

“Hi, I intend to be an applicant for a small handful of top-10 Business Schools for Class entering in 2012. I have applied twice before – in 2009 and 2010 – to 2 schools each time, and I was uniformly unsuccessful. I am currently reading the second edition of Great Applications for Business Schools. … [Later:] accepted at wharton – start in august. thanks”

“admits from [Carnegie Mellon] tepper, scholarships from [USC] Marshall, [Washington] Olin andVanderbilt [Owen]… Most likely I will choose Marshall, it has the best scholarship and is in California Regards,”

“I attended a Beijing local MBA workshop last May to secure my application success. So far, I am the only one admitted [Indiana Kelley] (2 of my classmates are still struggling to get off Top15 WL). It is not that my classmates are not excellent (they are all from China top10 U. and their GMAT are all as high as 700, 730, 750, 760, 770, etc.) , they were stuck with essay (either from content or grammar/rhetoric perspective). This afternoon, I shared how you helped me (interview and essay polish) to my classmates. I told them that … your writing style and your way of thinking to make the essay shine inspired me A LOT so that I was able to follow your style and win Kelley. They were all ‘Wowed’ by your professionalism, esp. the quality of service you provided. 3 of them will contact you very soon for similar services (either interview or essay or both). Congratulations on the incoming new clients!”

“Hi….. How are you? Thanks for keeping in touch. I’ve just got accepted in INCAE [Business School]which is a Harvard subsidiary in Latin America. I’m very excited. I’ll be going over there in 10 days and Im finishing all the details as we speak. Thank you for all of your help. Im sure if you didnt help me with the essays I wouldn’t have gotten accepted in this school. The filter is very strong but since i had your help I git in with no problem. Again ….. thank you thank you thank you”

“I apologize, I should have specified. I am starting my second year at Indiana University [School of Medicine]. … Things are going well and I am enjoying the lifestyle believe it or not. I got accepted in mid-march (not from the waiting list). Thanks again for your help with the essay.”

“Hi, Sorry about the delay in reply. I’m glad to share that I’ve received six offers and have finally decided to join Jones Graduate School of Business at Rice University. I want to thank you for all your help during the last application season. Please let me know if there is anything I can do for you. Regards,”

“Paul, Great news! I was accepted last week to Touro [College of Osteopathic Medicine]!! Thank you so much for all your help. You were so flexible and accommodating. Prepping for the interview was invaluable to my success! Thank you again!!”

“Dear [Admitify consultant], I was granted admission at Rush [Medical College] this afternoon. I guess I won’t have to finish the DO applications after all….Thank you for all of your help during the interview and application process. I am truly grateful. Sincerely,”

“Thank you for your help in my essays last year. Actually I was admitted by MFE program in HaasBerkeley last July and the program will start this April.”

“Hi, Accepted!!!!! I just received the news that I’ve been accepted to Virginia Techs school of medicine!!! Class of 2020! They called with the news and I could barely breathe hearing it! I know that I would not be here without you so thank you from the bottom of my heart for finally making my dream come true. You are amazing, your art of writing always an inspiration. I hope this news finds you well. I will let you know of any other offers that may come my way but out of the three schools I did have the opportunity to interview at, this was actually my favorite so I feel over the moon fortunate to have received this acceptance first…. [Later] Second acceptance! [Quinnipiac School of Medicine] Best regards,”

“Hi, Just got call from my adviser in Harvard [Graduate School of Education Ed.D program]. I got admitted and tuition waiver, and first year fellowship. Thanks so much!!”

“Well, I got accepted into Stanford [School of Medicine]. So right now that is where I am going to go. The only school that I would consider over Stanford would be UCLA [Geffen School of Medicine] (I interviewed with them already …). Thanks again for all of your help.”

“Hi, I can finally write with great pleasure that I have been accepted to, and will attend UC Irvine School of Medicine. Thanks so much for all you help and support! Best,”

“Dear [Admitify consultant], I was approved to go to the [Harvard] Kennedy School. I am going to Harvard next fall. Thank you so much for everything.”

“Hi, Just got call from my adviser in Harvard [Graduate School of Education Ed.D program]. I got admitted and tuition waiver, and first year fellowship. Thanks so much!!”

“Hey, I have some wonderful news for you! As for the grad-school update, I have some wonderful news for you! I was accepted to Stanford University [M.A. in East Asian Studies]! Woooohoooo!… I … am absolutely thrilled about Stanford! Once again, thanks for your help with my essay. I have so much to thank you for and am convinced your expertise editing my essay had a lot to do with my acceptance!…”

“Hi, The following is my final update on my interview process. Thank you very much for all your effort in helping me out with my essays. I certainly can not do this without your comments and editing. I provide you with the information below, so that you can use it for your advertising …
Accepted: Stanford [U. School of Medicine], Mayo [Medical School], University of Chicago [Pritzker School of Medicine], Vanderbilt [School of Medicine], Emory [School of Medicine], Albert Einstein [College of Medicine], Georgetown [U. School of Medicine], George Washington [School of Medicine], Loyola [U. Stritch School of Medicine], Rush [Medical College], Tulane [U. School of Medicine]
Invited for an interview but decline to go: Cornell [Weill Medical College], Madison [U. of Wisconsin],Medical College of Wisconsin
Rejected: UCSF, Northwestern, Tuft [sic] …
Thanks once again for your effort and expertise!!”

“I am happy to inform you that I received admissions from both Chicago and Columbia [LLM programs], Thank you so much for the help you gave me!”

“I was accepted into all of my top [Master of Public Administration (MPA)] choices: Columbia, NYU [New York University], GW [George Washington U.], Penn [U. of Pennsylvania], etc. I’ll actually end up attending school in Washington DC. Please list only my initials if you want to use this info for promotional info on your website, etc.

“Hi, I am writing to inform you that all the applications sent were successful at Essay stage…, thanks for useful pieces of advice. I am currently accepted by IESE and I also got a scholarship. I will see how it goes, thank you for your advice….[Later] as anticipated I got all the responses, I am accepted by all schools [INSEAD and Chicago Booth], thanks again for the advisory! Now the dilemma time begins,… Thank you very much a have a nice holiday break! Kind regards,”

“Hi, I did apply to some Master programs in Accounting…. I … have, as wished, gotten into USC’s Leventhal School of Accounting under their fellowship. I’m very excited about the prospect of attending USC. I can’t imagine what else could be better for me at this point…. I’m grateful for all of the help I have gotten along the way. Your book, even though specifically for MBA applications, has helped me in crafting my essays for my MS applications. Thank you as well for your timely feedbacks on GMATCLUB. Good luck with your work.”

“Hey, I matched at UCSF for Diagnostic Radiology. My first choice! Thanks so much!”

“Six interviews, 5 pending and one acceptance!! Thanks again. [M.D. from Oregon Health and Science University]”

“Hey, Happy New Year. Yesterday, I was accepted to my first choice– University of Miami Miller School of Medicine! Thank you again for helping me with the essay edits– you offered very valuable advice… And I do think the personal statement ended up being great!!!! I will definitely recommend you if anyone asks me.”

“Oh my goodness thank you so much!!! I’m over the moon [at acceptance by Ohio State U. College of Medicine]. [Paul Bodine Consulting consultant] has been absolute godsend, I couldn’t have done it without her!”

“Dear [Admitify consultant], in December you edited my personal statement for NYU [LLM program]. Today I received an offer!!! Thank you very much for helping me! I will recommend your service to other colleagues who also want to study in the U.S. Thanks again,”

“I just received the admissions decision for Duke and I was accepted into their DNP [Doctor of Nursing Practice] program!!! … Thanks for all of your help!”

“Paul, I am in! [IESE MBA] Super happy and super excited. Cant thank you enough for your support. It has helped me enormously in building up my case and making my CV exciting to the reader. The interview sessions were very fruitful as well. You lived up yet again to your reputation and i will raise a pint to that tonight Best regards”

“You are the first person I have advised on this. Rightfully so – One shot, one kill. I only made one application for one program (didn’t even bother with a second choice course) and that is to London School of Economics. Although colleagues have encouraged me to apply for PhDs in their department which I know I stand a good chance since they are lower ranked schools, that was always a backup plan in which I will only formally apply (reluctantly) if I didn’t get through at LSE…. ‘LSE is one of the world’s most selective universities at the undergraduate level, with many courses surpassing the 7–9 percent admissions yield of Ivy League universities Harvard, Yale,Princeton and Columbia. Some of the very top premium programmes such as the MSc Finance and the MSc Financial Mathematics have admission rates below 1%’ [Source: Wikipedia] … Paul, you played a massive role in my application process. Your books also helped immensely. With such immense competition, I simply cannot understand how any candidate would submit an application without first reading your books at the very least. Looking back, it is amazing that I made it through those odds as I genuinely do not regard myself any more talented than the next candidate…. I would like to take this opportunity to express my heartfelt gratitude for your services.”

“Hi I just found out that I was admitted to Berkeley [U. of California Berkeley MPH program]. Thanks so much for everything. Attached is the letter from Berkeley. Thanks again!… [Earlier] Hi Paul I’ve just received this from USC [Keck MPH program]! Thanks again for all the help!… [Earlier] I’ve just received this from GWU [George Washington U School of Public Health & Health Services MPH program]! Thanks so much for everything so far,”

“Hi, Thanks for following up. Actually I interviewed with U of Vermont [College of Medicine] in late March and just found out Monday that I’ve been accepted! … I became very excited about it after visiting the school and meeting some of the people. I think it will be a perfect place (other than cost) for my medical training. Thanks again for helping me with my essay … it really made a difference. I will recommend you guys to anyone applying to grad schools.”

“I wanted to thank you, Paul, for supporting me throughout this entire process. Without your essay advice and editing, I wouldn’t have had the opportunity to choose from such amazing graduate programs [Admitted at four programs including Harvard Graduate School of Education]. Paul, you also taught me about the admissions process. Without your help, I wouldn’t have been able to improve my essays.”

“Hi, Thank you so much for your professional help, I have received congratulated email from both USC School of Accounting and Claremont MBA program. I am admitted! … Once again, thank you very much! Have a great weekend! Best Regards,’

“Hey, I got in [Georgia Tech MBA]!!! I will joining in August. Thank you so much for checking… Thanks for helping me here,”

“Dear [Admitify consultant], Finally I have very good news.. I have been accepted by Oxford Brookes University to join the MBA programme during this fall, starting on 3rd October with the support of the Chevening Scholarship….I am very excited with such good opportunity. Paul, I am passing your e-mail to a friend who is involved in the telecom industry and is interested in your services… All the best”

“Dear [Admitify consultant] Thank you for your e-mail… Yes, I’ve got admission from NYU [New York University Draper Interdisciplinary Master’s Program]. I sincerely appreciate your helps and concerns. In addition, I could learn a lot from your editing. I will keep in touch with you. Thank you again. Wish you the best,”

“Hi, I’ve been meaning to write you! … I did get into the Masters in Real Estate Programs at NYU andColumbia…. I am going to be attending NYU’s program. They have a much stronger program than Columbia….So THANK YOU for all your help. I really appreciate it! Best,”

“I really appreciate all of [your] services. I am in total shock that I got admitted to an Ivy League Graduate school WITH funding! It’s surreal.”

“hello– i was accepted to mayo [Medical School], albert einstein [College of Medicine], oregon [Health & Sciences U.], hawaii [Burns School of Medicine] and ucla [Geffen School of Medicine]. i was waitlisted at wash u, stanford, u.penn, and duke. I ultimately decided to go to mayo, primarily because the students seem the happiest and they offered me a scholarship. i’m now in orientation week and trying to adjust to life in the midwest. thanks for everything.”

“Hy [Admitify consultant],
I apologize for not contacting you in such a long time, but the end of the semester ended up becoming very crazy and incredibly busy. I did want to share with you that I will be attending THE Ohio State College of Medicine and have received a full scholarship for attendance. I am unbelievably excited and cannot wait until August 1st. Thank you so much again and have a wonderful day!!”

“Hi, I just want to let you know that I matched at my #1 choice [Doheny Eye Institute] …. Thank you again for all the input you gave me these past couple of months. I’m sure my sister will get in touch when she starts applying…. Thank you!”

“hi,… I heard back from my first public policy school over the weekend, and I’m so happy (actually beaming with sunshine and light and explosions of joy) to tell you that I was accepted into Brown University’s Taubman Institute MPP program! Thank you so much for your help!”

“hello … I just accepted to mayo medical school and im waitlisted at a bunch of schools. I have a few more interviews left, so im going to see how it all works out. thanks again,” [attended Mayo]

“Dear [Admitify consultant]: I just wanted to let you know that I have been admitted to Columbia School of International and Public Affairs [Master of International Affairs, International Finance and Business]. This year the applicant pool was 40% larger and extremely well prepared. I want to thank you once again for helping me get the extra edge by submitting a strong essay and a powerful resume. I enjoyed working with you through what it turned out to be the most demanding part of the application process. Your guidance and input have been invaluable. My warmest wishes,”

“Of course I remember. … I have been accepted to University of Cincinnati [College of Medicine]and Medical College of Ohio. I have had six interviews so far. All Ohio schools as well as George Washington University [School of Medicine]. There are a few others that I am on a hold for an interview and others that are still considering my application…. I am thankful you helped me and have recommended the service to others here at [school].”

“hey … I’m attending drexel med [Drexel U. College of Medicine]. thanks for everything!”

“Hi, Things are great. I did get into the [U. of Pittsburgh] MHA [Masters in Health Administration] program – thanks again! … Thanks again Paul,”

“Hi, I recently got an offer from LSE [London School of Economics] for an Msc in International Health Policy! Thank you so much for your help! I will be sure to contact you again if I decide to apply for anything else! Kind regards,”

“Hey! I matched at my first choice – the University of Pittsburgh [School of Medicine]! Thanks so much for checking-in!”

“Thank you again for all of your help with my admissions letters. As a matter of fact, I was the first student called on in our class during orientation by Professor [Name, Pepperdine U. School of Law] who quoted from my letter [personal statement]. It was vey intimidating but very flattering”

“Thanks for following up… The essay turned out very well and I have gotten one acceptance thus far. I also received an ‘alternate’ standing at NOVA Southeastern University. I am awaiting some other schools. Once again, I was very satisfied with your help and it was very professional.”

“I recently learned that I have been accepted into the MS in Management and Systems program atNYU [New York University]. Not bad for someone who has been out of school for a minor Ice Age. The outline made all the difference for me as I was able to write the essay in record time and after 2 minor revisions was ready to go! Thanks for your prompt and professional assistance.”

“Dear [Admitify consultant], I was indeed able to send in all my applications on time, and have already been accepted to Christopher Newport [University]. The other schools to which I applied will get back to me around April, and I will be sure to update you as I begin to hear back from them. Once again, thank you so much for you help. Thanks,”

“Hi, Glad to hear from you…. Yes, I was admitted to Berkeley’s Professional LLM program, the summer one…. Again, without you I could not achieved all these. Thanks for your patience, time, energy and great guidance. Best,”

“Yes, I got into GGU [Golden Gate University School of Law]. I’m starting in August !! … Again thank you for all of your help!! Thanks to that wait-list letter you helped me with they let me in!! Much appreciated!”

“I’m sorry, I thought I told you already – I was accepted [Sciences Po EuroParis summer program]! Thanks again for your help, you have an excellent service.”

“I’ve just finished getting all the applications material together [for LLM application] and have to say that I am very happy with the results of your work!”

“Hi, First of all, I should say THANK YOU for your assistance in my person [sic] statement. I am startingNYU law school [LLM program] this fall semester. I am very, very, very happy about this outcome. NYU is the number one tax law school in the country…. I know that my personal statement was the determinative factor in NYU’s decision. How do I know? My personal statement that I wrote for law school [J.D.] admission is fundamentally different from the person statement [for LLM programs] that you and I worked on together…. Thank you for your follow-up and thank you very much for your help!!! I will definitely pass a word about [your service] to my friends. Good luck with your business.”

“Dear [Admitify consultant], just a short message to inform you that I have been accepted to the LLM Program at the George Washington University and Santa Clara University…. I have…decided to accept the offer from the George Washington University and would like to thank you for the excellent job you did on editing my essay and c.v.! I am really happy that all the trouble we took was worth while and will definitely recommend your services to other LLM candidates. Thanks again and all the best.”

“Ultimately, I was admitted to 2 [PhD programs in economics]: University of California at Davis andUniversity of Washington. I have decided to attend UW in the fall. I want you to know that I am really happy with your job. Your editions and recommendations for the Statement of Purpose and Resume were outstanding! I am sure that this was a huge factor for my admission to any of those universities…I am totally happy with the final outcome.”

“Dear [Admitify consultant]- Thank you for all of the help that you have provided me throughout my graduate school search. I have been accepted at the following schools for a Masters in Public Policy(MPP): Duke, Cornell, Columbia, Georgetown, and Texas. I have chosen Duke University as the place to continue my studies this fall…. Thank you again.”

“Hi, just an update on my medical school applications. I just got accepted to the University of Vermont College of Medicine. I will most likely attend there this fall. I did mention that I got accepted at a Canadian medical school before, but I’ll be attending Univ. of Vermont instead. Thanks for your help [with] … my personal statement. I think it helped a lot, since I had 4 interviews (3 US med schools, 1 Canadian med school) and got accepted at 2 of them. If I come across any other students applying to medical schools or any other graduate/professional schools, and looking for help with their personal statement, I will refer them … and mention how great a help you were. OK, thanks and take care.”

“Thanks for your help. So far I have been accepted to 4 medical schools [including University of Arizona] and I am still waiting to hear from a few others.”

“Dear [Admitify consultant], Hi! … I received offers of admission into medical school from the University of Alberta, Queen’s University and The University of Calgary (UC). I am now studying at UC and having a great time here! Thank you for all of your help with my personal essay. It definitely made a good impression to many of the interviewers on the admissions committee.”

“Hi, I just recently got word that I was admitted to McGill [Faculty of Medicine]! I’m extremely happy and excited for the opportunity. Thank you again for your helpful advice and critique on my essay. I appreciate having worked with you. All the best.”

“You asked me a while back what my status for medical school was. I can happily tell you that I was recently accepted at the Medical College of Virginia and that I start in several days. Thank you very much for your help.”

“Hi Paul, I hope you’re doing great. Yesterday I received an acceptance call from Loyola Stritch School of Medicine! Thank you! Please let me know if you need any more information from me. Best, [Later] I hope all is well. I received another acceptance from Robert Wood Johnson a couple of days ago. I will let you know what they decide once I hear from them. Thank you!”

“Hi, The interview season went very well. I was accepted to Oakland University [Beaumont School of Medicine] and UNC Chapel Hill [School of Medicine]. I have committed to Chapel Hill and withdrawn from the rest of the schools I applied to. [My Paul Bodine Consulting consultant] was extremely helpful. Her comments on my essays were insightful and made a huge difference in my applications. She was also very thorough in her analysis of my work and timely with her responses. I knew I could rely on her to help me when I had writer’s block or to help me make my points clear and articulate. She was also extremely helpful with interview prep. The questions she had me practice and the way she helped me phrase them definitely gave me an advantage going into each interview. I am very satisfied with how all my apps turned out and how this application cycle went. Please thank her for me. All the best,…”

“Hi, I got accepted into the MD/PhD program at Albert Einstein College of Medicne [sic] in New York.”

“Dear [Admitify consultant], I just wanted to let you both know that today I was accepted to WF [Wake Forest School of Medicine]. Obviously, I am very happy,… Thank you very much, Mr. Bodine, I’m definitely very happy! And thank you for all your hard work and guidance that has contributed to this.”

“Hi, Here is an update.
I was accepted at University of California, Davis [School of Veterinary Medicine]
I was placed on the wait list and later accepted at Kansas State University [College of Veterinary Medicine]
… I will be attending UC Davis. Thank you again for all of your help. It made that application process much less stressful.”

“Of course I remember you and am as happy with your [sic] now as I was then. Update: admitted toCardozo [Law School], Brooklyn [Law School], and Temple [U. Beasley School of Law]; wait-listed at Fordham; rejected early decision from Columbia. Everything else is pending, though its possible I’ve been admitted and don’t know it as I’m currently in [foreign city]. I’ll keep you posted. … [Later:] I received a call from Fordham asking if I was still interested in attending. … I’ve been awarded … the Dean’s Scholarship from Cardozo…. [Later:] Add Northwestern [Law] to the list of schools I was admitted to. E-mail just came in today…. Thanks for all your help.”

“Thank you so much for your guidance through the application process. I just wanted to let you know that I was accepted into the FNP [Family Nurse Practitioner] program at Columbia University!! Thanks for everything,”

“Hello, Just wanted to give you an update! For my Master’s [in international relations] Degree, I have been accepted to Yale’s Jackson Institute, Johns Hopkins SAIS, Columbia SIPA, the London School of Economics, and Tufts Fletcher School. I am on the wait list at Harvard Kennedy School, and am still waiting to hear from Georgetown’s School of Foreign Service. The only school I was not accepted to was Princeton’s Wilson School. I have decided to attend SAIS next year! I am very happy with my decision…. Hope all is well with you, looking forward to hearing from you!! … Thanks again.”

“Everything is going well. i am currently in my 2 yr of law school [Florida State U. College of Law] and very well…. P.S. I had a professor tell me that my personal statement is one of the best she had ever read. Thanks again.”

“This is so funny! I was literally just now thinking to email you. I matched for ophthalmology at Baylor [College of Medicine] which was my number two choice!!!! I am overjoyed. Thank you for all of your help. My brother will be contacting you next year for his residency essay:)”

“Actually I am currently enrolled in the Masters of Management in Hospitality program at Cornell’s Hotel School, it is basically an MBA program focused on the hotel and hospitality industries. Your book [Great Application Essays for Business School] definitely helped me with my admissions essays, thank you for checking up on me. Regards,”

“Dear [Admitify consultant]: I wanted to thank you for your help with [Name]’s essays. As you know, they were a success! His early acceptance to Yale [College] pleased all of us, and most especially him. Hope your year is going well. Our thanks, again.”

“I am accepted by Wake!!! Dear [Admitify consultant]: I just knew that I am accepted by Wake Forest University [undergrad]! They actually mailed me the letter on December XXth, but I could not receive them because I was in [home country]. Thank you so much for your hard work and care about Wake! I am so thankful!!! My parents also want me to say thank you to you! Thank you so much! Yours,”

“Hi, Thank you for following up…. [Name] got accepted to the university of first choice, University of Western Ontario, and advanced placement into the Ivey Business School at Western. He was also accepted to Huron College at Western. Because of his over 90% average, he also qualified to have his own room at the Huron residence. Thank you kindly for your professional assistance and for being timely in responding to our needs. That was critical in completing the complicated and stressful application process.”

“here is the update as of now. … I have been accepted by USC [University of Southern Californiaundergrad] with honors. Thanks…”

“We just got back from college tours. [Name] got into the [undergraduate] engineering programs(more difficult admissions) at University of Washington, UC San Diego, Tufts, Boston University, UC Davis and UC Santa Barbara…. [Name] chose UC San Diego yesterday, after visiting all the schools that offered him admission. He is very happy with his choice, as UCSD has one of the best computer engineering programs in the country. So, until we have grandkids, we’re done! But we’ll certainly recommend you to friends, family and neighbors with kids on the college path. We couldn’t have done it without you, and thanks again for all your help.”

“I’ve just received an acceptance letter from Lewis and Clark [Law School], though they are full this year, they’ve offered me a spot for Fall 2011! … Thank you for all your tremendous help in this process! I really appreciate your support.”

“Dear [Admitify consultant], I am doing great, I have received acceptance from Mississippi College School of Law … I want to thank you for the help an [sic] encouragement.”

“i got into [University of California] irvine and [University of California] santa cruz, and once again thank you for you [sic] help”… [college applicant]

“Hi, … My sister got accepted into university at buffalo. [undergraduate]”

“Hi, I applied and got accepted to several schools [HHL Leipzig Graduate School of Management,Stockholm School of Economics, Thunderbird MBA programs]! Many thanks for all your help and advice, it made a difference truly! Kind regards,”

“Hi, Thank you for the edition, I wanted to let you know that yesterday I recieved [sic] the acceptance letter from NYU [Masters in Integrated Marketing] so I don’t know if i’ll be sending the application to Georgetown, what do you reccomend [sic]? NYU was my first choice anyways. Thanks again for everything!”

“Hi, I wanted to let you know that I was accepted to Fordham’s [School Psychology] Ph.D. program! Thank you so much for your assistance along the way. I will be sure to recommend you to others I know going through the process. All the best,”

“Hi, I was actually going to email you soon when I just got your email. Well, I was accepted atPittsburgh [School of Medicine] and my state schools and waitlisted basically everywhere else…. I withdrew from GW and Boston U before I even had a chance to get off their waitlists b/c I knew I would rather go to Pitt. I received interviews from Mt Sinai and Jefferson and refused for the same reason. I got off the waitlists at Georgetown, Wake Forest, Vanderbilt, and Emory [School of Medicine]. I choseVanderbilt [School of Medicine] in the end. I am still on the waitlist at U of C and Columbia. I am pretty sure I will still choose to remain at Vandy even if do receive acceptances at either school. Thank you so much for your help. I am thrilled with the acceptances I have received. They are all top notch schools. If my MCAT score was a little higher I am sure I would have received interviews from the schools I was rejected from and acceptances from more places rather than waitlist offers. … Thanks again.”

“Just accepted to Duke [U. School of Medicine]. … After I got into Duke, I withdrew my applications elsewhere. First choice school…not too shabby.”

“Here’s my admissions update: I applied to eleven [medical] schools and was offered interviews at eight of them. I have been accepted to Jefferson Medical College, Robert Wood Johnson Medical School, and New Jersey Medical School. I was waitlisted at University of Pennsylvania and Washington University – St. Louis and am still waiting for a decision from Case Western Reserve University, Tulane, and George Washington University. Thanks again for your help. … [Later:] I am in my second week of med school at Jefferson Medical College and loving it… I liked Jefferson 2nd best of the 8 so went with them and did not even try to get off any of the lists. Thanks again for your help.”

“Dear [Admitify consultant], I ended up getting of [sic] UPitt’s [University of Pittsburgh School of Medicine] waitlist during the summer, and today will be our fourth day of class.”

“Hi: Thanks for checking back. I got into all the law schools I applied to already. Thank you anyways. [Earned JD from University of Miami School of Law]”

“Dear [Admitify consultant], I am happy to announce that I was accepted into my first choice graduate school, Yale University [biochemistry program]. Your ideas really got the writing process going. I ended up going through several versions, but in the end it was probably my best piece of writing ever. Thank you very much for all of your ideas and editing! Sincerely,”

“Hi, I was accepted at the following [undergraduate] schools:
University of Washington
University of Redlands
Gonzaga University
Loyola Marymount University
University of Portland
rejected at Santa Clara University … but I am really excited to be going to the University of Washington!! Thanks for all of your help!!!”

“Hey Got dinged from HBS (despite very positive impression from interview), but got accepted toStanford! By the way-I got admitted to Wharton(from waitlist) as well. Now considering where to go:) … Thanks a lot for your mock interview!”

“I must tell you that the that your book [Great Application Essays for Business School] helped make a difference. I did increase my GMAT score by 100 points, but I also had the aid of your book helping me write more concise essays. It was the difference between being denied acceptance, and selected for a fellowship to a top 25 school in one year. Thanks!”

“I know that my personal statement was the determinative factor in [Harvard Law LLM program’s] decision. How do I know? My personal statement that I wrote for law school admission is fundamentally different from the personal statement that you and I worked on together. I was a good student at college, but I could not get in [the same school] for a J.D. degree. But this time, they accepted me into their LL.M. program. Thank you for your follow-up and thank you very much for your help!!! I will definitely pass the word … to my friends.”

“You were stellar. I’ll be in touch in early January for your assistance in the final editing of my essays.“

“Hi, I just got an invite from [University of Virginia] Darden. Yayy!!! … Thanks for all the help. Your essay and reco edits made a HUGE difference. Thanks,”

“I couldn’t have been any happier when they told me I was in with a full-tuition scholarship plus stipend. You definitely helped me submit the best application possible. I couldn’t have managed all of this without you.”

“Hi, I hope you’re doing great. I wanted to give you an update on my graduate school decision. I accepted admission to Fordham’s PD [professional diploma] program [in School Psychology]…. Thank you so much for all you did for me. You were so helpful and you are incredibly talented. I will pass your name on to friends in the meantime. All the best,”

“Paul, At my school someone with a 760 and impressive credentials applied and was rejected. My GMAT was more than 100 points less, and I got in. Your service helped me present my qualifications and experience effectively.”

“ I am so glad that I came to know you, the best B school advisor, at this point in my life. Many thanks for your help. Please keep in touch.”

“Thank you for your congratulations; … the credit goes to you. With the essays that I wrote originally, I would never have gotten in. You know how and showed me how to bring the elements of my story together so that I could submit a persuasive, compelling application.”

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“Thank you for your congratulations; … the credit goes to you. With the essays that I wrote originally, I would never have gotten in. You know how and showed me how to bring the elements of my story together so that I could submit a persuasive, compelling application.”

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“1. First and foremost, I feel the quality of my application is now on an entirely different level than it was originally. You really pushed me toward a level of detail I just would not have come up with on my own, and I appreciate his creativity in crafting words toward a strong effect. I have had several of my friends review this letter, and I have had strong positive feedback.
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Please feel free to use any of this in any sort of testimonial literature/ programs you may have. Thank you again for the professional, speedy, and quality service.”

“Hello, I just wanted to let you know that I am extremely pleased with the quality and timeliness of the service I have received from [you]. I originally sought this service toward my statement of purpose. I was so happy with the results, I requested editing services on my letters of recommendation and resume as well. We have completed my essay and resume, and much of the way complete on two of my three references. Your worked [sic] has helped me tremendously on several levels.”

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“I’ve been meaning to get back to you… John matched for his residency at his first choice program for neurology, and I matched in family practice at one of my top choices in California. We are both grateful for your comments, remarks, and editing suggestions for our essays. I strongly believe that your help gave my essay the direction and focus I was looking for, and played an important role in making my application more competitive.”

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“I just wanted to write and thank you for all your assistance. Certainly your help has made my personal statement [for residency] much stronger. Not only that, but I feel a little bit more confident about my application and chances overall… Thanks to you and a little luck, I think I’ll do pretty well.”

“I looked over the draft, IT LOOKS AMAZING, you should get a Pulitzer prize!!! for your amazing ability to integrate ideas and themes.” [M.D., Stanford U. School of Medicine]

“Hi, Wisconsin hasn’t accepted me yet which I find surprising. But I was accepted yesterday to [Albert] Einstein [College of Medicine MD/PhD] which is just as amazing! If Wisconsin does seal the deal now it’ll be a tough choice… [Later] I received the official good news from Wisconsin [School of Medicine MD/PhD/MSTP] yesterday!! It’s going to be a tough choice between the two. … [Later] I decided to accepted UW-Madison’s offer and will be part of their MSTP starting in the fall! Thank you again for all of your help! It is too banal to describe the extent to which you’ve helped me throughout the application process (and as a writer in general), but I absolutely wouldn’t have had anywhere near the success I have without your help. I am deeply appreciative of the intensive effort that you invested in me and my application. It was always comforting–during an otherwise incredibly stressful period–to know that I had you and your expertise on my side. All the best,”

“Yeah I was accepted to NYMC [New York Medical College, Pharmacology] and I’m attending there now. Thanks! Best,”

“Paul was great. I’m an experienced writer with a degree in journalism, but I was really struggling with presenting information about myself in a Personal Statement. I was amazed when I received my outline how he organized all my information in such a great format.”

“This is just a note to express my appreciation again for your suggestions and comments in reviewing my Personal Statement… I just received an acceptance letter from [Name] College of Law. Since my qualifications were not among the top echelon, I know that my Personal Statement was a major factor in their favorable consideration. With your help, I was able to focus and clarify why I am motivated to become a public attorney … Your bracketed comments made it easy to make the necessary revisions to prepare a polished document.”

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“I have been meaning to email you to say THANK YOU and to tell you did a wonderful job editing my essay. I really like the way it turned out, and am very confident in submitting it my graduate schools. Thank you very much for your time and patience with me.”

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“You are amazing–your additions and comments on the essay were great! Thanks so much again… If I ever run for President, I know where I can find a speechwriter! [Later] By the way, I never got to tell you in the end how much I appreciated your help. Best of luck!”

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“I just wanted to let you know that today I sent out my last two applications. Regardless of the outcome, I wanted to express that the quality of my essays improved dramatically from the ones I had submitted two years ago. I feel, at this point, that my credentials are much better presented and clearly explained. I wanted to use this e-mail to thank you for your time and dedication, and your very valuable inputs and edits.”

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“Dear [Admitify consultant], Thank you very much for everything. I will definitely keep you post it [sic] and let you know what the results were. No matter what they will be, however, I would like you to know that the shape the essay is currently in simply could not have been possible without your help and expertise. MANY, MANY, MANY THANKS! … You deserve every single word of praise. I contacted you based on a great recommendation, but not knowing exactly what to expect. What I received in return was literally a revelation. Thank you for all the exceptional work!” [New York University master’s program]

“Dear [Admitify consultant], Hope you are doing fine. I just wanted to update you since we spoke last time. I applied for LBS [London Business School] Sloan program and admitted. I will be starting this Jan. Thanks to your inputs, which helped in clarifying my goals lot further. Please stay in touch.”“I can see why people consider you the best! Thanks for such a quick turnaround….Thanks,”

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“Dear [Admitify consultant], As a homeschooled country bumpkin raised in the boondocks of Vermont who was recently accepted to several top-tier graduate schools, I have been meaning to write you and thank you PROFUSELY for publishing the book “Great Personal Statements for Law School.” My fiancé lent it to me after he had read it and implemented your expertise into his graduate school applications, and I was equally inspired. Although the book is tailored to prospective law students, I found almost all of the information just as applicable to my area of study, a Masters of Science in Mental Health Counseling! I can say without any reservation whatsoever that the tips, techniques, examples, templates, and just plain honest, down-to-earth advice you offered in your book is, by far, the highest contributing factor in my acceptance to Columbia, NYU, University of Rochester (whose Masters in Education program is a subset of the renowned Warner School of Education), SUNY Albany (whose PhD. program in clinical psychology was recently ranked #4 in the nation), the University of Vermont, and several State University of New York schools! Not only did I earn admission to a graduate program that is a perfect fit for me, but I was also awarded a graduate assistantship, which will cover over 75% of tuition for the 2-year program. Oh, and my fiancé? The one who recommended your book in the first place? He was also accepted at Columbia and NYU and has a graduate assistantship. ☺ I CAN NOT recommend your expertise, genius and guidance enough…. I want as many people as possible to hear about you and your great work and services!…. Again, thank you – SO MUCH! – for your help! Sincerely, and most appreciatively,… [Later] Dear Paul, I know I already thanked you for writing your fantastically helpful and interdisciplinarily-applicable “Great Personal Statements for Law School” book, but I wanted to give you an update on how far implementing the tools in your book has taken me! Not only was I accepted at all but one Counselor Education programs to which I applied (I applied to 7!), including NYU and Columbia, but I was also offered a Graduate Assistantship at SUNY Plattsburgh, where I currently attend graduate school and receive a full in-state tuition scholarship for my Assistantship. As the Graduate Assistant at the Office of Graduate Admissions, I interface with many prospective applicants. As we approached the Fall and now Spring application deadlines this year, students would come -panicking! – into our office, worried about their personal statements. Without fail, I refer them to your book by encouraging them to either purchase it on Amazon or rent it from our library or Career Development services! I have also been awarded a Professional Development Scholarship, and am in the process of applying to two more Graduate Student scholarships. The tools in your book make it extremely easy for me to tailor my personal statement — attached, for your reference! — toward these scholarship applications! A WELCOMED opportunity to any full-time and working grad student who already has a herculian course/work/homework load! So, in essence, on behalf of myself and all of the folks to whom I recommend it who ONLY have positive reports… THANK YOU for your wonderful book!”

“ I want to thank you for your book “Great Applications for Business School.” I found it incredibly insightful and helpful for my EMBA admissions process. I followed your guidance very closely in my approach to the essays and interviews. As a result, I was recently accepted at all three schools that I applied to, including most my top two: Kellogg and MIT… Thank you again for your book!”

“Going good! I wanted to speak to you first, I wanted to speak to you personally because [Michigan] Ross got back to me and admitted me for the weekend [MBA] program so I wanted to personally thank you. Thank you so much. This wouldn’t have been possible without you so I would hope to meet you personally to thank you for this. No, seriously, I’m telling you, believe me, I’m so happy today. It is because of you; you helped me through this process and I’m really happy and appreciate your help. Thank you so much for all your help and time you have given me. I really appreciate that. Hope to see you soon and thank you personally. Believe me, this is the best thing happened to me in my career yet. So I’m really happy today.”

“Hi, I found your book [Great Applications for Business School] on Amazon back in November when I was beginning the application process, and I wanted to write to you and let you know how tremendously helpful your book was. My application required that I write four essays, which seemed to be a daunting task, but the tips highlighted in your book provided me with a lot of encouragement and guidance. I am extremely excited to be accepted to Kellogg’s Part-Time MBA program for Fall 2013 and thought you might appreciate a “success story”. Best Regards,”

“Hi, You are a genius. After reading your book, ‘Great Applications for Business School‘, I have transformed from a reluctant writer to almost a seasoned copywriter. Well, not quite. But I cannot say thank you enough times for writing this book, and helping out non-writers like me with B-school apps….Your book has been like my shrink cum counsellor…. [Y]our book has reinvigorated my enthusiasm to apply to a top school. Thanks a ton. Best Regards,”

“Hi, I LOVE this [Stanford essay edit]! It is so moving and demonstrative of the experiences I’ve had and how I am growing. I am going to make minor adjustments and will send it back to you to see what you think. But overall, I’m SO pleased, because it rings so true and your support helps it flow in such a smooth, cohesive way. Thank you!!!”

“Hi — thanks for checking in. I actually did apply to HBS and Wharton, and got into both schools. I will be attending HBS in the fall (I’m actually in Boston this weekend for the admitted student welcome event). Your book was very helpful during the admissions process, so thank you for that! Best,”

“I did apply. i’m going to Yale Law and Stanford Business School (ad hoc joint degree). Let me know if I can help you out at all…. I did not [use an admissions consultant], but I did use your book [Great Applications for Business School] extensively for mba programs”

“Dear [Admitify consultant], I hope you are doing well. I used to be a ‘Hopeful Applicant’ from India, with dreamy eyes, wanting to get into the top schools that I could only see from afar, but always thought unreachable. But not anymore! I am going to Columbia Business School this fall and really wanted to thank you for it! I spoke with a lot of consultants and did a lot of the ‘so-called MBA research’ that we all go through- sometimes helpful and sometimes greatly exaggerated and worse – absolutely unaffordable. I think the turning point in my application was the day, I met a senior at an information session and she suggested that I buy your book -‘Great applications for Business School’. Best advice ever! I thoroughly enjoyed reading the book and it really proved to be my Bible for the application process.It also condensed all the varied sources of information and tips and made the overwhelming application process seem actually doable! Being an engineer, I loved the organized data mining approach towards the app process. But most of all, writing down everything I have done till now and actively thinking of the motivations and feelings behind the major inflection points in my life(Some good and some just difficult to deal with) have really made me understand myself and the world around me better! Thank you for guiding me in taking this amazing checkpoint at 25 years of age! Maybe I’ll open the book when I am 40 next and do it again! Few people understand how a well written book can change lives !!:) Thanks a lot, I owe you,”

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